by woodmanone
Always enjoy your writing! The Cold Steele is a good and entertaining piece of work. I re-read your stories , but always look forward to your new ones.
Thanks for your efforts and sharing!
wmo, this was a good stab at the Noir genre. Your writing style is lean and mean without wandering off into the unbelievable. I like that you kept it in bounds of what you knew . Since none of the commentators accused you of inaccurate geography.
This was a fun read and thanks for not making me wait weeks and weeks.
I really enjoyed reading this story as well as the other Cold Steel stories including the one on Kindle.
and we wonder about his next cases. tk u mlj lv nv
The dialogue is constantly filled with interesting phrases and while there is plenty of action it is constantly downplayed. Just like dear old Dragnet it teases us.
Still seems like there's an untold story on Matt's wife and Captain Harper that needs to be completed. Matt is a fantastic character. Please give us another adventure and fill in the blanks on his past as well. Thanks for the great writing.
You are as good as any writer I have read, in addition you have used language that even my old fashioned baptist wife would be willing to read. if you know of any others like you please send me a note, you do have my email.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
You're like a vintage wine, you get better with each reading. I am still looking for other writers that don't need descriptive sex to sell there stories.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
language anywhere in it. do you have new Cold Steele stories coming up?
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
There's a lot of room for improvement. Dialogue was stilted. Story was ok. Characters were flat. Keep trying.
Nice light reading. Enjoyable characters, setting and plot.
Looking forward to reading more of your works.
I like this character, Matt Steele. He's a tough guy but not so tough he doesn't get his ass kicked occasionally. He's a smart guy but not so smart he doesn't get fooled occasionally. And he seems like a pretty nice guy who helps his friends out when they need it. I'd like to see more Matt Steele stories.
A fun to read detective, mystery, drama, thriller, love story.
thanks
The story kept my interest from beginning to end . Abby's statement at the end was like iceing on the cake !! Loved it !!
Sometimes I wish I could give MORE than 5 stars. This is one of those times.
Just AWESOME! Thanks so much for these Cold Steele stories. And especially thanks for keeping Matt and Abby lovingly together and not making this a LW type story.
Loved it great story this series and your westerns are outstanding and my favorites. More please