Rest Stops in a Mad Life

Oh, My

Very Nice Start!
I await Chapter 2.

Great work! Engaging storyline and characters, flowing erotic scenes, and a cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Terrific start! Don't make us wait too long for chapter two. I'm hooked!

Please tell me there is a part 2! Awesome read!

Hilarious plot twist!

MST, you did it again. Another skillfully written contretemps of the human condition. That beginning with your Noora character, made me cringe in experienced sympathy. When yah gotta go, yah gotta go now!

At my age, Mother Nature doesn't call. Mother Nature yells! The way the bitch treats me, you would think we were married.

I liked how you developed your characters of Noora and Ann. And even revealed some of the character of Bridgette and Samantha. And that ending! I love plot twists.

However, I do have one strict criticism. Bringing a glass bottle to the beach is barely tolerable only if you take it away with you when you leave. Bringing glass to the beach is illegal in many jurisdictions. Have you had ever stepped on shattered glass shards? That is not an experience you would ever care to repeat.

Are you sure you're not a lesbian?

'Cause you write some damned good lesbian stories. Love it.

This was amazing! Seriously can't wait and madly hoping for chapter 2 of this!!!!

amazing!

cannot wait for part 2 dont be too long for it.

Amazing

I loved your story. And the plot twist had me begging for more. Good job!

Hot

One teensy thing? That I wouldn't say if the story weren't so good? You said Ann couldn't cum without something inside her.

This

is really REALLY good!!!

Lovely story

So good, I wish it was longer and not the abrupt ending!

Thank you,

L

Oh that's perfect!

Love the twist ending. Hope to see a second part though I suspect you're going to let it stand as is and that works just as well.

That ending.

Loved it!

A wonderful story from a wonderful friend and talented author. Thank you! Fast cars, sandy beaches, and hot girl-on-girl sex. What's not to love? The twist ending was great, but the slight cliffhanger leaves me wanting more. I'm probably not the only one. ;)

Wow!

Not my usual read, but I checked it out at the request of a friend. Amazing story! Wish I could write like you!

An excellent read! Time to digest what I just read, get a soda and some chips - wait prepare for the next trip (aka chapter) read and make another Rest Stop in a Mad Life.

Wow

This story was great.... But WOW that ending was AMAZING!!! There has to be a chapter 2 coming soon. Well done.

Stunning

So beautiful. Sigh. If only. Xxxxxx
Emily.

More please

A great story with an intriguing final twist-cum-cliff-hanger. There has got to be more. Don't delay---it's going to be fun when the four women confront each other.

Next chapter

What happens next good story :)

More!

Chapter 2 please...

Life just got really Interesting

... I can't wait to read the next installment but I can imagine the look on both ladies faces when they walk into the house and see Ann and Noora semi-nude when Ann's phone will be ringing. Just hope you will do justice to this story.

Loved the...

story and the twist at the end ;)