Amazing story. Please ignore any nay sayers and go where ever you want with this. It's your story and you are doing an awesome job telling it. Gwen's exhibitionism and the progression of her sexuality feel very natural. The dreams and internal conflict make for a great build up. Hopefully this will have an equally great pay off.
I am really enjoying your story. I love how Gwen is coming out of her shell. I would love to see her and Tim go visit KD at the beach hotel again and Gwen get her a thong bikini to show off in and maybe even run around in only a little cover-up. Just a suggestion though. But keep up the good work!
Wow, your on a roll, this one came out fast. Hope that means your full of ideas just waiting to be written. Keep up the great story, we'll keep reading. Thanks
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Anonymous05/25/15
Never let down
My favorite story line. First story I look for when I log on. So many possibilities. Keep up the good work. You always get five stars from me.
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Anonymous05/27/15
Keep it coming
I love this story both parts and can't wait for the next chapter.
Are what keep me coming back for more. I find myself wanting to see how far Gwen will go in her new-found liberation. I like her more and more with each additional chapter. This is by far my favorite serial story on this site. Keep it going, please.
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Anonymous05/28/15
Two in One Month
Yes!! Two in one month. Fantastic as always. Gwen is truly a Goddess!!
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Amazing story. Please ignore any nay sayers and go where ever you want with this. It's your story and you are doing an awesome job telling it. Gwen's exhibitionism and the progression of her sexuality feel very natural. The dreams and internal conflict make for a great build up. Hopefully this will have an equally great pay off.
Thanks
What a great job you are doing with this story.
keep it going!
I am really enjoying your story. I love how Gwen is coming out of her shell. I would love to see her and Tim go visit KD at the beach hotel again and Gwen get her a thong bikini to show off in and maybe even run around in only a little cover-up. Just a suggestion though. But keep up the good work!
Loved it
Wow, your on a roll, this one came out fast. Hope that means your full of ideas just waiting to be written. Keep up the great story, we'll keep reading. Thanks
Never let down
My favorite story line. First story I look for when I log on. So many possibilities. Keep up the good work. You always get five stars from me.
Keep it coming
I love this story both parts and can't wait for the next chapter.
Great characters
Are what keep me coming back for more. I find myself wanting to see how far Gwen will go in her new-found liberation. I like her more and more with each additional chapter. This is by far my favorite serial story on this site. Keep it going, please.
Two in One Month
Yes!! Two in one month. Fantastic as always. Gwen is truly a Goddess!!
As usual, can't wait for the next one. :)
Thank you
Excellent
Great chapter
I love the way that Gwen and Tim are moving ahead in this adventure. Very good writing.
AG
HOORAY!!!
At last, the long awaited facial...
Gwen's reaction was exquisite, love her laughing reaction. Your description was wonderful. Love to know just what is going through Tim's mind.
More please.
Very Good
When I want some enjoyment reading, your stories always do it. Thanks
I absolutely adore this series.
Another wonderful instalment. So sexy, so believable.
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