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It bugs me ....
... that the author damaged the best story of his I've read with the too common bull shit about the hymen.
Otherwise a first rate story
Consistency is key!
He calls her 'Tracy' once instead of 'Trudi.' Rather distracting. Not bad, though, overall.
follow up story with these two?
The end of the story 'Oh, dear. I was going to fret now, expecting him to jump me while I was there. What if he didn't? Would I be disappointed or relieved? Oh, hell, I didn't know,' makes it sound like you have idea for these two t have another chapter. I hope to read it!
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