My Friend The Call Girl

****

Not bad - felt a bit "rushed" but thoroughly enjoyed the ribs. 😏

not one of your better ones

was he ever married. the relationship with the wife was non-existing. no emotion, few details of their life. just an empty story.

Bad wife, good call girl, Saint Blake

This is not a stupid wife story, this is a Saint husband story. A knight in shining armor saves the poor whore and condemns a wealthy whore. In both cases, they were whores; women willing to sell the use of their bodies for a buck. Regardless of promises, marriage vows ect. A whore is always nervous about marriage because she knows that one day her husband will figure it out. Even if she isn't doing business while married, she is still a whore. She is the kind of person that will sell her body. Once a person has removed that barrier in their view of legal, ethical and moral boundaries - there is no going back. Once willing to sleep with married men for money they were committed adultery along with that man. How many women did they "cuckold"? Did they care? How many children did they encourage fathers to cheat on? When you really think about it, a person who is a whore is really a piece of shit. Even more so than the stupid, lonely married slob that falls into her business web. So, Saint Blake traded one whore for another whore. Why? Perhaps his ego was bigger than his brain.

Loved it!

Awesome story, great sex, 5*.

I wish this was longer.... Maybe had developed the wife a bit more.....I'm not saying throw in her POV or anything, but more interaction between the wife and husband would have better laid out her thoughts and motivies.

dont expect her to

faithful to you... after experiencing sex with so many different men i doubt she will be able to be faithful to one dick for the rest of her lif

A good story...just a question...

A good story...just a question: Being his wife rich ( her father almost offered him 4 million dollars for him not divorce her daughter), why in hell did she need to fuck around to be nº 1 in sales? He never confront her with this question...3*

Why

Why on earth did you feel the need to detail the condo layout?!?

Beyond that, the wife and marriage were such non-entities in the first part of the story that nothing that happened later had any weight or significance. It pretty well felt like his main companion was Cecile, already. And the wife's reaction to getting caught was so tired in its scripting that any residue impact that might still have remained was lost.

It might have worked better if we had learned half of the ongoing details of his working relationship with Cecile (post fistfight) through conversations with his wife. A little playful teasing, a hint of actual jealousy on her part, and suddenly you have a real character for a wife instead of a plot point. Those interactions would also help to establish their marriage and connection better in the audience's mind, making the revelation of her business activities more powerful.

Very well done.

Sounds like hubby was making plenty of money. Why didn't he use the photos as "blackmail" to get the wife to give him more than 50%?

Good story

Ok, shoot me! I like to have , in many instances,a happy ending. Never like cuck stories and BTB only works for me sometimes. While I am not a literary critic, I do think this story needed some extra "background" on the husband and wife as a minimum....one or two extra paged. Ok, I did say I enjoyed the story! Thanks for sharing

Ed

Nice story

I enjoyed the read. As illustrated here, there's a big difference between sex before and after the vows are taken.

I like this story

Yeah, it is a "pretty woman" plot and predictable, but still and entertaining and fun read. Five stars from me.

I'm a beliver

I dated a x escort, she was great, should have married that girl. I was a dumb ass and let her go, I regret it now.

A case of comparisons

I get 'character development'. I get 'atmosphere' and 'emotion' (sort of).

There is also such a thing as 'pacing'.

In this story, in three pages, you were able to

a) develop characters

b) address a couple of problems.

c) bring a resolution to said problems.


Nice effective word count. Compare this to one or two pages stories which are only able to have a single frigging conversation in 3 or more pages.


I don't mind long stories as long as something is happening in it. This had a nice flow to it.

Ditto to Unoriginalist

Sweetie was a paper cut-out. She and Hubby do not even talk once until the shit starts hitting the fan. Even then, nothing she then says or does (or her folks) has ANY impact on the outcome!

Hard to imagine how the physical make-up of the condo system made an iota of difference in the story. Telling We-The-Readers about Babs' taste in furnishing, on the other hand, established her as a classy woman, a critical factor!

WHY in HELL did Sweetie have incriminating pictures of herself? Even if most of them were in a locked drawer? If she was keeping momentos of particularly good trysts, that's why you get a private bank-box, or keep them in the combination-keyed safe in which she keeps special drug samples.

4.6 = 5*

First rate fairy tale for dudes

This is as disposable as it is amusing. I refuse to critique it on a deeper level of thought then imhapless had in creating it.

A + B + C = predictable

After the overly complicated method of disposing of the abusive client, I could predict most of the rest of the story. All that was missing was great reunion sex after some of the wife's trips and an overly complicated plan to implicate the wife in some crime she did not commit. Despite the lack of believability for almost all plot points, I kept hoping for some interesting twist. It never happened. I suppose there is a receptive audience in LW for this type of story, but I have trouble with the husband's unrecognized hypocrisy and double standard. He had an emotional affair and deceived his wife long before he know she was having sex with other men. He wants to marry and have children with a sexually experienced and promiscuous women, but only if she become a completely different person for him.
On different subjects, I think I might like reading your stories. However, not on this one.

4 star

Nice happy ending for our wronged hubby. Nice ending for the " pretty woman" would've been nice to see how u envisioned Wifey detailing why she did what she did and to what extent. And I'll join the crows in bashing the detail u gave the Floorplan but not the details if wifies downfall.

Gave it a 5

This was just plain fun to read even though it was pretty predictable.

****

Interesting story but difficult to believe. I expect more astounding things have happened in real life, but show me. (I'm not from Missouri, aka the "show me" State). Cheers!

Great story

This girl loves a happy ending. Love the story.

I AM from "show me"

And I apologize for not rating your story before now. It's not rated highly enough, in my estimation. Well...I was BORN in Saint Louis, but I grew up in Texas, so; kind of "show me" and kind of "I believe what I SEE", but I see this as a really good bit of escapist writing. 5 STARS. Ignore the louts who say otherwise.

Another golden nugget from your quill

I have always enjoyed your writing, more so than some of your dastardly characters. This one is a gem of redemption and resurrection. Thanks for sharing......

The lady was a professional

That is very different from a slut... Perhaps that lable could be attached to the ex-wife, after all why did she keep picture of herself being fucked, unless they defined her?
Nicely done five star story.

Dump a lying whore for an honest one...

... an interesting spin on the old tale. I liked it.

And never trust Pharma girls. I've yet to meet one that wasn't both Pusher and Whore in one.

Loved the story ... But

Six years is a long time to be married not to at least listen to her to find out how she started being a whore! Plus it might have been hot to hear about it!

Just saying .....

Thinking again

After reading this story, I gave it a high score. However, the story stayed with me because there were a couple of issues that bothered me which would cause me to give it a lower score if I could do it again. Why did the husband put up with his mostly absent wife as long as he did? He never questioned his relationship with the hooker next door. Didn't he wonder if he could be enough for a highly sexual woman who frequently had sex with many different men over a long period of time. Can you really turn a whore into a house wife? I wonder if he would have been better off taking his slut wife back just long enough to take advantage of the two million dollars her father offered him? Was the hooker with the magic pussy worth it? There was a wimpy quality about him that I couldn't respect.

Would have liked to seen the ex suffer more...a LOT more!

So the slut wife plays and plays, gets 50% of everything, has a daddy trying to cover up her mistakes, and she what.....just walks away? She needed to experience more....several STDs, maybe a few of her 'closed sales' customers spreading the word around that she is a willing whore, with pics and videos showing up on cheating web sites. Oh, and one of the consequences of her cheating could be enough damage to her equipment that she learns she will NEVER have kids. Then, as she ages, she is dumped and replaced by another stupid cheating wife, only younger, newer and tighter. In other words, the divorce needs to be the beginning of her long, slow, complete crash and burn! She needs to learn she threw away everything for a few thrills and closed sales! As for the new business they started, it would be great if it were a business devoted to revealing cheating slut wives!!!

The benevolent . . .

. . . whore rides again. Good fun read story.

One thing puzzles me...

...why did Jaime keep photographs and videos of her extra-marital liasons? I assumed that she was angling for a speedy divorce, for any one of a dozen reasons, but not so apparently. Everyone gets their paperwork in a mess, but this is ridiculous.

Enjoyed it

thanks for the offering.

Loved It!

But for one thing:

I realize cheaters aren’t necessarily the brightest bulbs in the circuit, but I find it incredibly hard to believe that she would actually carry around incriminating photos at all, never mind so carelessly that they could so easily be exposed.

Still, my first 5-star for you!

Like it.

I liked it. Despite the subject it was a feel good story, and everyone loves a tart with a heart.
I do have a couple of critiques though: I think Jaime could have been a little more rounded, some personality, what drove her to cheat? Was she really just a slut, caring only about her career?
Also the proof of her infidelity was a little too pat. Everything falling into place just a bit too conveniently. I actually wondered at one point if Cecile might be working some sort of scam to get rid of Jaime as a rival. But everything played out predictably, sad to say.
It might sound like I'm unhappy with this story, I'm not, just a little disappointed that there was no twist or surprise. Otherwise it was an enjoyable read with the main characters very likable, which is rather rare in this genre.
I'm not trying to tell you how to write, you are clearly better than I am, these are just my thoughts.
I shall now take a look at your other offerings, hopefully they'll be just as good.

Second reading

I enjoyed reading this story more the second time. The first time I gave it a 4. This time if I could I would rate it as a 5. The only weak part of the story is there is really very little about Jamie, she is an underdeveloped character.

Jamie really needs to be fleshed out more for the betrayal to have any weight.