Pretty good story and first effort. I enjoyed it. I agree with the Anon comment that you need to continue and I also agree and am a sucker for happily ever after, madly in love raising their children. I look forward to read the next chapter(s)
Disappointing, the sex is just a dream, and if Nick didn't cum from the dream, he is definitely in need when he wakes up. He should certainly finish the job. Why didn't Jen return while he was doing so, - maybe finish him in her mouth? Maybe it can lead to what we all want.
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Very good start. Interested to see where this potential love affair heads from here. My opinion... deeply madly in love, raising their kids.
Pretty good story and first effort. I enjoyed it. I agree with the Anon comment that you need to continue and I also agree and am a sucker for happily ever after, madly in love raising their children. I look forward to read the next chapter(s)
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Disappointing, the sex is just a dream, and if Nick didn't cum from the dream, he is definitely in need when he wakes up. He should certainly finish the job. Why didn't Jen return while he was doing so, - maybe finish him in her mouth? Maybe it can lead to what we all want.
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