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A Wider Sky Ch. 14

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by mrsgray201105/28/15

longer

I have enjoyed your storied but I wish they were a little longer. As well when you post try to keep to the same genre because your story is are in different sections and it makes hard for people who follow you to keep up when you post. You have the making of a great story

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by katgoddess106/03/15

Too short. I really want more! This story is just so interesting!

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by Anonymous06/09/15

More more more!!!!

Really love this story

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