All Comments on 'Dark Weres Ch. 08'

Zena needs her behind kicked.

I can see Kas kicking both of their butt especially since they don't know she mated and is now a wolf.

For Jebutu and Lavinia whose story I LOVE and their new little pup! I am so glad you are dealing to that nasty Zena. Bullies are horrid nasty awful scumbags that need to be corrected as harshly as possible!

I have enjoyed reading everything you have written. Unfortunately I don't think your editor and proofreaders are doing you any favors. Unlike your other stories this one seems disjointed and erratic. The grammar and spelling errors are ruining the story line. I rarely make any comments about how a story I'd written if I am enjoy the tale, but this one requires something be said. I would suggest you look for a new editor to reread the Dark Weres series and help you reorganize and correct the other errors. That all being said, I want to thank you for taking your time to write and place it hear for us all to enjoy.