by EllenMore
A worthy finalist. perfect minimalism encapsulated in a tight little piece!
I love everything about this. I love the imagery, and how much you have expressed in so few words. It resonates so deeply with me, and it had my vote for the challenge. I may have to embroider it on a pillow or stick it in a frame... something. Truly, I love it that much.
Why do you submit your poems in the "non-erotic" category?