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Nooo!
Damn it was getting good with a kick ass twist!
great
Love this series cause they just long enough so not to lose interest. Hope you add nylons to this series. Mom taken or seduces son fully dressed including nylons.
the truth aspect
In Liar Liar Jim Carrie's truth just spilled forth. Like a great wave. I'm speaking of the Elevator scene where he whips around saying IT WAS ME before the door closes. Or how he he questions him self saying why is this happening to me and starts babbeling out I'm getting what I deserve, I'm reaping what I have down before slamming his hands over his mouth so he couldn't say any more.
With Brandon's test subject there is a certain level of sneaky-ness they have been allowed to maintain, which the truth aspect should have them vomitting out these self told lies
Interesting
that he has become as much of a bully as those who bullied him. In fact, in some ways he is worse. I know this fantasy, but it seems the only thing he learned was that his neighbor was right: his power allows him to be top dog and he can treat others anyway he wants.
Nice addition
Another great chapter. Though be careful not to allow your protagonist to lose control of the situation. Working very well so far. Can't wait to see what the girls got into while he was busy next door.
Frustrated Here...
Came at least 3 times during the whole time I was reading your fucken SEXY story, looking forward for the next chapter to come out, although I'm going to be a bit frustrated until it does 😅
Fantastic
Great story. Next time either Parker or his Milf mom disobeys the punishment should be for mommy to punch Parker in his nuts as hard as she can.
Love it
Great chapter here. Brandon being especially cruel to Parker was pretty awesome. I really like the scheming that goes on in the girls under his control which adds a lot of possible intrigue. Really cool story overall. My favorite parts is probably when Brandon just adds to their list of tasks for disobedience until his victims know their place. I hope he gets more ambitious and figures out a way to mass distribute his concoction. :)
Oh boy.
Something tells me that her revenge plan is going to backfire big time. I also hope Brandon took into account for making sure the husband doesn't find out.
I really do enjoy your writing. You're one of my favorite authors here. I realize you really have a taste for revenge. That and dominance. I never really gave it much thought but after reading your stories I have to admit it intrigues me. Keep up the good work Looking forward to more.
Very enjoyable but i hope you write more of this series soon. Would like to read what happens to the entire cheerleading squad if brandon gets that far.
I love this. I'm not really sure what else to say but I wish I found this the day it was published. Oh and the day it was published was my birthday, well that last entrance was not the part important...
It's good to laugh!
Humor is something usually missing from erotic literature. I've been enjoying this series, and I hope that it can continue.
Never MORE
We all know you will NEVER finish this series. EVER.
Author's Note
I love sarcastic negative comments... they are my favourite.
That said, there will be at least two more parts in this series... the next part is half written, but I am struggling with the mom plot.
When I figure that out... the story should be able to get finished.
I hum and haw over mom being sprayed and or not....
Jasmine August 2015
PS: If you are curious about a sequel, email me. I will tell you what stories I am working on. With 200 stories choosing which stories need sequels and which ones don't is always a challenge.
Often I base it on requests and comments...
Spray his mom with the new spray he was working on so she will not be like the others and not be a slut slave
A Slip UP? Or part of the plot?
I notice you didn't put Becky under a secrecy order.
I want more
Please tell us when you are going to continue the story.
Very sexy
When is the next part coming out its already October and u said it would be out in fall do u mean November
Niice!!!!!
Please finish this one!!! I have to know where this leads!! Great story!!
Slow learner
What exactly does she expect his reaction to be when he finds her ears deep in his mom's pussy?
Love the stories
But you really need to write the one about his ex boss.
"Revenge is a DICK best served cold"
"Revenge is a dish best served cold". Change it to "Revenge is a DICK best served cold" ..... LOL
Love the revenge
Love the revenge of the bully. You should have him changed into a Transsexual. Then he could be a rea cum slut.
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