All Comments on 'Meeting Daddy in the Past'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This was simply so great, u HAVE to write more chapters. I want to know if she would be able to meet her dad back in time again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
fantastic

Absolutely fantastic.

I will be looking for more to come from you. The story line was not rushed or jumbled like some. Very good flow. Your story made me wet before the father even got his daughter undressed. Great work. Next chapters please......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Make her get pregnant by him(the father)

maltesersmaltesersalmost 9 years ago
Mmmm great start

Very good start - well written and very sexy. I look forward to more

HornyDarkAngelHornyDarkAngelalmost 9 years ago
Next one

God i cant wait tilk you do another chapter

I m dripping wet waiting

AgnosticChrisAgnosticChrisalmost 9 years ago
Excellent

This would make an interesting series. I hope it keeps going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
perfect

I can only agree with the other comments. Its a great story and i hope that you will continue this story. Five stars

drtybabygurldrtybabygurlalmost 9 years ago
mmmmmm

More please!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great Story

Love the story and can't wait to see what happens next

daddy1950daddy1950almost 9 years ago
Very good

I'm a sucker for time travel, so sexy time travel is a bonus. Interested to know how you deal with the meeting with her Dad now she's back in the present.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more

Enjoyed this, well done! Hope you continue with more stories :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Very good waiting for next chapter !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Don't

Like real long stores much, but wish this had one more chapter, so I'll have to wait till you write more.

Great story by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please continue the story..

This is a hot story that need's to be continued. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Five stars

Amazing story please continue it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more please

this is one of the best yarns I've read here in years

valpvalpalmost 9 years ago
Wow!!!

Please, please, please write more. So vivid and sexy asf!!!!!

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlalmost 9 years ago
Very Creative

This story was so different from the usual dad-daughter incest stories. I really enjoyed it. I am intrigued. My mind was instantly contemplating the changes this illicit sex has made to their future.

olblueyesolblueyesalmost 9 years ago
very imaginative

i love the premise!! this little tale has legs!! love it!!

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 9 years ago
very...

..intriguing to be sure. Didn't think she'd get cornered so fast, though.

cindyluwhocindyluwhoabout 8 years ago
indeed ...

Intriguing twist on an always-hot story line

secretobsession1857secretobsession1857over 2 years ago

ok this was something new and very different from everything else on here and have to admit I loved this story a lot hope you will continue another chapter

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 2 years ago

Think I'm gonna love this.

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