by NaughtyVisions
This was simply so great, u HAVE to write more chapters. I want to know if she would be able to meet her dad back in time again.
Absolutely fantastic.
I will be looking for more to come from you. The story line was not rushed or jumbled like some. Very good flow. Your story made me wet before the father even got his daughter undressed. Great work. Next chapters please......
Very good start - well written and very sexy. I look forward to more
God i cant wait tilk you do another chapter
I m dripping wet waiting
This would make an interesting series. I hope it keeps going.
I can only agree with the other comments. Its a great story and i hope that you will continue this story. Five stars
I'm a sucker for time travel, so sexy time travel is a bonus. Interested to know how you deal with the meeting with her Dad now she's back in the present.
Like real long stores much, but wish this had one more chapter, so I'll have to wait till you write more.
Great story by the way.
This is a hot story that need's to be continued. Thanks
This story was so different from the usual dad-daughter incest stories. I really enjoyed it. I am intrigued. My mind was instantly contemplating the changes this illicit sex has made to their future.
i love the premise!! this little tale has legs!! love it!!
..intriguing to be sure. Didn't think she'd get cornered so fast, though.
ok this was something new and very different from everything else on here and have to admit I loved this story a lot hope you will continue another chapter