Thanks for the heads up about the this story. I was wondering if you were going to continue the story or if this was the end. I have enjoyed it so far. Don't let negativity discourage you,
I'm puzzled by Oro's decision to send Jora ahead - does he have a plan for her in Lamoria or is it simply a way to separate her from Esyld? I don't think Oro should feel threatened by Jora, but who knows what really is percolating in another's heart. That being said, King Mazhar is right - continuous war isn't good, and sending Esyld to Lamoria will probably help achieve peace. And going as Oro's mate, rather than as a servant, will hopefully resonate better with the Lamorians - as long as they don't see her as a sell-out. Looking forward to the continuation after you write part 2.
I have been wanting g to comment sooner but after each chapter I would vote and feverishly move to the next chapter. You are very talented and I have fallen in love with Oro and Esyld. I am also happy she didn't carry on fighting what her heart already felt. I also happy Jara will not die...there is a sisterhood of love between them that should not be removed. I figured she would have been pregnant soon, but am happy to see it happen. I can't wait until the next installments come out!! Great read! Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Don't go away for too long. Kisses
I really enjoy this story. The only thing that didn't sit well with me was the jorah affair, and I almost stopped reading after it to be honest. I just hope that there are no further issues that come between oro and esyld.
I hated Oro for awhile and was quite convinced he needed to be thrown off a cliff but, alas, I have come to like him :)
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Anonymous05/04/16
Am I too late for an update?
I just stumbled upon this site today, and read all 7 chapters in one sitting. Excellent writing! I just hope you're still working on this story, I'd love to see what happens next.
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Anonymous05/13/16
Update?
Any news on a potential timeline for when we'll get the new chapter of the story? Pretty please? I read in your bio that you're working at it again, and it's been a few months since that posting now. I'm dying to read more, and it's been sooooo long! Please hurry and release a new chapter soon!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
There is going to be more to this saga, right? There's so much more I wanted to see from these characters! Particularly, Oro as a husband and father! I hope you haven't given up, and are still working on bringing us more from this awesome world you created in that genius noodle of yours! This could absolutely be turned into a book, and I would absolutely buy it. Please, continue the tale!!!!
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Anonymous09/07/16
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I really hope you're not tired of people saying this but please continue...!! Wonderful story and the love scenes are perfect.
Awesome!
You're leaving us in the perfect storm. I love this story, from the capture to the kings table. The secrets and the textures keeping me wanting more.
Thanks for the heads up about the this story. I was wondering if you were going to continue the story or if this was the end. I have enjoyed it so far. Don't let negativity discourage you,
Fantastic
What an awesome stoy!!
Getting better and better
I'm puzzled by Oro's decision to send Jora ahead - does he have a plan for her in Lamoria or is it simply a way to separate her from Esyld? I don't think Oro should feel threatened by Jora, but who knows what really is percolating in another's heart. That being said, King Mazhar is right - continuous war isn't good, and sending Esyld to Lamoria will probably help achieve peace. And going as Oro's mate, rather than as a servant, will hopefully resonate better with the Lamorians - as long as they don't see her as a sell-out. Looking forward to the continuation after you write part 2.
Well Done!
I just binge read all of these stories and love them. Keep them coming!!
Such a wonderful story and storyline.
I have been wanting g to comment sooner but after each chapter I would vote and feverishly move to the next chapter. You are very talented and I have fallen in love with Oro and Esyld. I am also happy she didn't carry on fighting what her heart already felt. I also happy Jara will not die...there is a sisterhood of love between them that should not be removed. I figured she would have been pregnant soon, but am happy to see it happen. I can't wait until the next installments come out!! Great read! Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Don't go away for too long. Kisses
More please
Not a fan of Jorah
I really enjoy this story. The only thing that didn't sit well with me was the jorah affair, and I almost stopped reading after it to be honest. I just hope that there are no further issues that come between oro and esyld.
First multi-part series read, 100% in love
I hated Oro for awhile and was quite convinced he needed to be thrown off a cliff but, alas, I have come to like him :)
Am I too late for an update?
I just stumbled upon this site today, and read all 7 chapters in one sitting. Excellent writing! I just hope you're still working on this story, I'd love to see what happens next.
Update?
Any news on a potential timeline for when we'll get the new chapter of the story? Pretty please? I read in your bio that you're working at it again, and it's been a few months since that posting now. I'm dying to read more, and it's been sooooo long! Please hurry and release a new chapter soon!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
More?
There is going to be more to this saga, right? There's so much more I wanted to see from these characters! Particularly, Oro as a husband and father! I hope you haven't given up, and are still working on bringing us more from this awesome world you created in that genius noodle of yours! This could absolutely be turned into a book, and I would absolutely buy it. Please, continue the tale!!!!
💚
I really hope you're not tired of people saying this but please continue...!! Wonderful story and the love scenes are perfect.
I NEED to Know
What happens next????? PLEASE!!!!
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