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Excellent
Well done, I really liked this one. Some people may say it is in the wrong category but it does not matter.
Yes, MF, it is a hot episode ... but ...
There is NO evidence of the marital status of EITHER of the participants in this hot sexual episode. (Yes, there IS a weak hint in the last sentence, but that is IT!) An LW story requires at least 3 characters (preferably with all 3 having a critical function in the tale!) (and 2 being married - or nearly so - to each other!) A TLW story can be done with 2 characters, but then it belongs in Romance or Erotic Coupling. This tale could also be in Mature or (maybe) First Time!
unrated (but hot)
Thank you
Being new to posting my work on here, I'm not that familiar with the categories and I apologize for the placement. I'm not sure how to correctly place them in the proper place or if I can move them.
Thank you for your compliments regardless.
Good story and for sure a LW one...
Good story and for sure a LW one...That's why I don't agree with @Lickideesplit!!! It's not mandatory tthat a good LW story had more than two persons...It can be only the couple in love...We understand that they were a couple, but it could be even more clear that they were a happy married couple...3*
Thank you!
She was confident enough in their relationship to give him the redhead he craved to please him but in the end no matter how intriguing, he was content with his blonde. Obviously, they were in love and a couple. Thank you for the vote of confidence. Regardless, all in all the comments have been very complimentary about my story, no matter what the category should've been. ;)
Sweet!! I hope she tastes like a candy cane.
I'll care what the category police think after they move all the cuck crap into the Fetish category, or the trash, whichever is easier.
Stories like this threaten those poor souls who want to disbelieve in true marital sexual bliss. If they can't have it, then nobody should have it; very sad people. Thank you for illustrating what a husband and wife can have, if they truly love and respect each other. Now that's hot sex.
Wow!
Thanks! That is EXACTLY what I tried to portray. A loving, caring couple who wanted nothing more than to make each other extremely happy. I think it worked. I like my sex to mean something.
A very, very exciting romp between an man and his wife.....
....clearly they are totally connected at their libidos.
That they do these things for each other and do them with gusto and excitement is remarkable and wonderful.
I hope you expand you repertoire in this category!
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