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Too many improbabilities...
This story has too many improbabilities!!! As a fantasy it's all right, but as a story it has too many improbable facts...And let's see what the following parts will bring...2* for now
If Scott thinks its OK for his wife to spend the night with this guy, . . .
Then Scott deserves whatever Denny does. Stupid husband stories are, stupid.
And why won't he know?
Can he really be THAT dumb? This was just too implausible. Even for fiction. A story needs to be somewhat in touch with reality to make it readable. This wasn't. 1 star.
great LW read I gave it a 5
for effort and story content. Eat it annomny
Who Said the Story Was Fiction?
Thanks to all, seriously, for the comments. Appreciate any and all feedback (as long as it stays above the personal and/or vile level.
Can't imagine others may be in a relationship where the love and trust is so overwhelming that a night away with another man, who you've known since you both were in Little League, is no big deal?
Those relationships DO exist. We should all be so lucky. CT
@impo_61, why do you feel the need to repeat your comments title in the freaking comment? There is NO need!
As for the story, without complete trust there is no relationship and the author feels it is ok to cheat on a spouse as long as you've known the guy/woman you're cheating with for a long time, that is their choice it's not for me and I am so glad I read that comment so I know to NEVER read anything by this 'author' again.
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