Flash of Muzzle

Visceral story

Despite the era of use your words and don't be judgemental - people braking vows and violating trust produces strong emotional reactions. This is a great flash story.
Sad, almost haunting. You gave enough perspective of the wife and her slime lover and the wronged husband.

New meaning to "B T B"

That really puts a different spin to BTB... problem is, it also puts new meaning on a "Flash" story! BTB, but don't burn yourself in the process!

LOL at frontlinecaster's macho hypocrisy

Unless your mother named you frontlinecaster.

How is a profile that reveals nothing beyond "male, over 18" any less anonymous than someone who doesn't want to bother with setting up an account just to duel with a mental lightweight like you?

Awww...

I always love reading happy endings.

Thank you all for your comments and votes. I suspected this would not fly well for everyone and I accept that. Please remember - this is a story, nothing more. I will be writing a number of shorter flash stories over the next few weeks before penning down my next longer tale - some will appeal to one set, some to another - but please don't take them to heart.

Next one has been submitted and should be up in a day or two I hope.

Also, regarding this one - my original submission was rejected - too violent and gruesome. This is the cleaned up and toned down version. I want to thank Laurel and Manu for their time and efforts as well - it's very difficult and sometime seemingly thankless what they do.

-V

violent ending

The plot was good & your writing was very well done & this is why I scored it 5 *****. However I do not believe in murder as a solution to spousal cheating: but if I came upon my wife or daughter being raped, different story.

wow

Well written.
5*

And to frontlinecaster, i would be really mad if my parent's gave me a name like yours :)
It's really big of you to disclose your personal information here and not be anonymous.......no wait, you are just as anonymous as the rest of us you utter fuckwit.

Go and crawl back to the rock you live under you moron.

from Nick who lives in Alingsås, Sweden.

good ass story

fuck morons like frontdicksucker, every time a woman gets fucked in the end, its because the author was a man hater. What the fuck is Oprah then. If a man kills a women, he's "most evil" or a woman hater. If a woman kills a man, she "snapped". Fuck that, anybody can get mad enough to kill, even these pussy assed faggots making comments on this story. Good fucking story.

frontlinecaster is hilarious

he actually thinks he's contributing anything of value to the public feedback. sorry ass is doing nothing but whining about anonymous comments. looked at his bio. talk about being a hypocrite. haven't read a single word of his that had any value yet either to the author or other readers. Do us all a favor, find bonnie and swingerjoe, the other two trolls of LW and transfer yourselves over to the fetish category, more to your liking. Don't deny it, read enough of your comments to know your preferences.

From Duna.

Generally the murder in cheating story make the story sad Consequence story.
There are some exceptions as Big2K "The Fate of Her Lovers " which stories are BTB stories in spite of the murder(s) in it or Roald Dahl's excellent story from the high Literature (The police collegues ate the evidence........). The murder from cheating is sad consequence in story and in the life.
The true BTB when the cheating spouse gets strong negative effect after the cheating on the other spouse and she/he can see the ex spouse is happier.
However I do not agree the offenders. IT IS IMPORTANT TO KNOW THE PRICE OF THE CHEATING MAY BE MURDER and some Consequence stories are place in the Literotica Loving Wives to show murder may be in some % from extramarital activity.
However a good BTB story is much better than a sad Consequence story as this.................and good BTB stories is good example how a smart husband (or his friends) arranges good negative effect against the cheating wife or her lovers or lives much better as the ex wife instead of murder!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jeez!

What happened to first amendment rights? All sorts of comments are made here, including bullying. So what is wrong with Frontcaster expressing his thoughts. You have to admit that some of the BTB crowd's comments are off the wall but these do not make them heroes or tough guys; and they seem to be accepted by the readers here as normal.
While I agree with the first amendment rights, I think this site should not allow people to use hate and attack people personally; that includes the BTB crowd, the happy for a reconciliation people, Frontcaster and the good authors who write for this site.

I used to bang a chick that was engaged when I was in my early 20s. I never thought the chick would really get married at the age of 19 especially since she was sucking and fucking me at least a couple times a week. She was great fun. Then it was a few weeks before the wedding date and she started trying to make plans for how we were going to see each other as soon as she got home from her honeymoon , how we could get together at least once a week and she wanted me to come to the wedding and reception. I put my foot down. I told her I had no interest in attending the wedding and that I didn't mess with married chicks. She asked why. I told her I thought her boyfriend was a pussy(he used to drop her off at my place sometimes because I was her "friend") but even a pussy can pull a trigger and I knew he had access to guns through his father and brothers. I told her it was unlikely things would have gotten too crazy if I was fucking his girlfriend or fiancée but fucking a man's wife is a whole different story especially if she/we had been rubbing his nose in it for so long and he was being a trusting love blind fool. They were married less than a year. She caught him cheating and then fucked 3 of his best friends till he caught her. She called me up when the divorce was final but she wasn't much fun when she wasn't cheating on anybody and I had no plans on being the sap she cheated on with someone else. Bitch had the balls to even try saying,"...but I'd never cheat on you". Yeah, right.

1st Amendment

People throw the Bill of Rights around like it is the 10 Commandments. You might read it before you cite it, its only a couple of pages. The 1st Amendment restricts the ability of the Federal Government to limit free speech. It has nothing to do with conduct between or among private individuals. The people renting and running this site can delete every comment unread if they wish, and the 1st Amendment would have nothing to do with it.

I don't condone murder....but I can fully understand his feelings and actions.....

.....too many responders calling names to inflame the argument away from the facts.
1. If Stangstar is a misogynist, then everyone that disagrees with him is, by direct association, a misandrist (um, that would be a man-hater to you one-sided off center worlders with limited access to a real dictionary).
2. Hubby is a human, so subject to passions and poor judgement. But hey, maybe the prison time before the great high and holy state of New York commits murder will be instructive. I bet he'll learn his lesson then, won't he?
Murder. Hmmm. He can't but they can. Hmmmmmm,...and in many circles and many parts of the world, HE was justified.
3. Wifey is a misandrist. She breaks a covenant (not a business contract as some have purported), abuses hubby's love and trust, selfishly destroys everything she said she desired in life with this man, for some gland games with an equally stupid, foolish, selfish, destructive neighbor man. She uses the neighbor for her entertainments, apparently believing she will be vindicated in the courts, if she gets caught? That's reading an awful lot into it, but hey, look at a couple of volumes of divorce court proceedings. Apparently a LOT of women think cheating should be OK and that they should get rewarded because they can carry and push out babies...no matter the parentage. Hubby has to pay.
And you people wonder why murders occur over infidelity? It isn't bad enough that she ripped his soul apart from his body, she has to rape him in court?
Yeah, I like some of the older accepted punishments for the crime of wanton destruction of a marriage by infidelity. Oh, and for the misogynists in the crowd (the real ones, not the "labelled by the haters" ones), that sword has TWO edges. Meaning, it cuts equally well in both directions. So, for all you big-dick (in your own minds) sex gods that fuck every barfly you can find, I'm equally promoting the same response for you, as fair play.
How about this idea.....
Because the courts have "decriminalized" adultery, arguably one of the most destructive acts in any society, why not equally decriminalize maiming the offending spouse to the degree of the harm they cause? Then, well, if death results, I guess it really did hurt that much.
Reasonably I would think at the least that robust public humiliation and several good canings, as well as losing everything (that's all joint assets) to the offended party when adultery is proven would be far more just than the kind of utter and complete bullshit that the courts dish out today.
We need to get back to justice.
Nope, I don't like how he ended it, but hey, it wasn't my wife sucking that guys cock and fucking around on me. But until the courts return to justice, I like retribution just fine.
And hey. To all all you whiners out there....It's just a story....geez!

FUCKING YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS KILL DA FUCKING SLUT

FIVE STARS HOMBRE

When an author writes a story about cheating, or even consensual swinging, the anons here come out of the woodwork to moralize and condemn that author, often harassing them, threatening them, telling them to kill themselves, and going on and on about how this story is everything wrong with modern society.

An author writes snuff porn so they can jack off to violence against women, 'Hey guys, it's just a story! Calm down...' and 'Women like her deserve to be killed!'

The same author writes another story, this time the woman uses violence against a man, 'Hey! Whoa, why don't we get to hear his side of the story? And why don't we see if they reconcile or go to counseling? This really isn't the full story, clearly!'



Nope, no obvious misogyny or hatred of women bubbling under the surface here. No one here is saying that the author can't write their violent little snuff fantasies, nor that you can't read them. All anyone is doing is pointing out that there seems to be an awful lot of anger and hate and violent sentiment on this site from the readership, and it is almost /always/ pointed towards women.

Funny

When a writer puts out a cuck raac story and commenters trash the story and sometimes the writer the pro cheating crowd shows with their standard refrain "It's just a story."
But write the ultimate BTB story like this one which reflects a sad all too true reality the same crowd shows up apoplectic with rage.
Hey it's just a story. And a damn well written one.

"A mitigating factor..."

Don't think a news report would ever say this. Motivating factor perhaps.

get real

grow up
drop the bitch, steada being thr macho fool what will get you life behind bars
cause the laws are made to protect the the sluts and johns
1 star

You Say Tomato and I Say Tomata!

and you say it's not snuff porn amd I say it is.

"...infidelity may have been a migigating factor. . . ". "To mitigate"--"to lessen in force or intensity", as in the impact of the storm was mitigated by the strong sea wall"; or, "to make less severe", as in a punishment--"after being found guilty, the defense presented strong evidence in mitigation, showing the accused was emotionally distraught at having found his wife cheating ". But the newspaper, at least an American one, would not use that term in the initial report! The newspaper's lawyers would jump all over that, and the local prosecuting sttorney would be jumping as well! With that word at this stage of any criminal proceeding, the newspaper has just poisoned the jury pool by essentially stating the double homicides were justifiable or excusable.

5*

Damn, frontlinecaster, would you just shut the fuck up. Who cares what you think?

I See No Crime Committed By Albert

It is my firm belief that a husband has every right to terminate the life of his cheating wife and her lover if he comes upon them in the act of infidelity. Trust me, I would have no problem doing what Albert did. If I were a member of the jury, I would steadfastly hold out for acquittal of the victimized husband.

5

annony is just an old fat ugly fag!!

Murder is never condoned but it happens. When a spouse man/ woman finds their wife and friend are fucking and walks in with his dick in her mouth are grounds to snap. It's usually a double homicad/suicide. It's not ok but a cheating spouse is bad enough but losing your friend and your wife in such a humiliating way, I could see murder because he snapped

frontlinecaster mysoginist this

Was a time husband catching wife and lover in the act he was allowed to kill them both
For my part, if either spouse catches the other cheating same goes
If you want to screw someone other than spouse fill out paperwork.
The lowest circle of Hell-Dante's???-reserved for those who betray others
JUSTIFIABLY SO
YOU SCREW SOMEONE OTHER THAN SPOUSE IN MARITAL BED YOU KNOW CHANCE YOUR TAKING
IF YOU SRE STUPID ENOUGH TO DO IT ANYWAY
YOU ARE TOOOOOOOO STUPID TO BE ALLOWED TO LIVE
Your genetic makeup has to be eliminated from human gene pool
Otherwise specie is weakened-gets weak enough extinction follows
DISPOSING OF CHEATERS IS IN HUMANITY'S BEST INTEREST
FRONTLINE CASTER OBVIOUSLY HATES MEN
NOT SURE THE WORD FOR THAT CONDITION
STRAPONITIS?????