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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/15

Rabid fracking Doms

Need to be put down...quit breathing...double tap double tap...dead dom walking

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by Anonymous05/29/15

did you write this only to get reactions from readers?

This is a joke? Right? Did you write this story to get a reaction from readers? This wouldn't happen. If it did, I bet your co-workers would respond to your moans and pleas. But maybe you really did meet a crazy man.

I am curious if you are going to add to the story. I was drawn in and I could not stop reading it.

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by Anonymous05/29/15

What?

She should have used her safe word right away. Any normal office I've ever been in, someone would have called security--or the police--and he'd have been gone.

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by Anonymous05/29/15

Perhaps move the category

This sounds a lot more like noncon than BDSM, perhaps a different audience would receive your story better.

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by Anonymous05/30/15

Questionable

This sits on a fine line between BDSM and non-consent. While I enjoyed the story, I can understand why others may find it a bit unnerving. I think it would fit better in the non-consent category. That said, I'd like to hear more about this relationship and where it goes from here.

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by restrainedqueen06/22/15

I love this!

I loved your story. Very hot and I totally feel you on the element of abuse/non consent. Keep on writing and follow your passion! Don't let these people who fail to read your opening statements and recognize that its just fantasy!

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by I_Enjoy_Your_Stories06/22/15

Five stars even if its not my cup of tea.

Is this your fantasy? Yikes. But okay. Each to their own. The story was too violent for me, but you are a great writer. I did feel every bit of it.

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by heatseekher0106/23/15

spicy

Well it does verge on the darker side, but a neat fantasy - nicely written, especially liked the pussy spanking/whipping...

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