All Comments on 'Loving on the Levee'

This is possibly the best story I've ever read at Literotica, and I've read more than a few. It's incredibly well-written. There's a story there, and the story is amusing and arousing. I loved it.

Where can I get a copy of the other version, is it longer? I was so impressed with the quality of writting, I'm going to recommend to all my friends, especially the engaged ones!

This is definitely the best of the two versions (I also preferred "Moonlight & Revelation" to its rewrite, "The Touch of Her Thigh"). Maybe you should consider conflating all four into one unified story, editing out the discrepancies in character names, etc?

great story

one of the best

good job!!

Wonderful story. Built on truth. Reminded me of my own youth in Virginia. I miss those simpler days.

Thanks