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by Mr James

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
what happened??

what happened to Colin and Joanna??

did she come back?

did colin end up with mom?

MontgomeryGuyMontgomeryGuyalmost 11 years ago
It has promise, but....

The story is pretty good. You set a major conflict between Pauline and Joanna into motion - and then you just stop. The build up is good. You just need a conclusion.

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEover 2 years ago

So let down!!!! Why start a story and not finish it:-( Would not dare to start anyone of your other stories!!!!

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