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The Girl Next Door Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/08

what happened??

what happened to Colin and Joanna??
did she come back?
did colin end up with mom?

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by MontgomeryGuy05/27/13

It has promise, but....

The story is pretty good. You set a major conflict between Pauline and Joanna into motion - and then you just stop. The build up is good. You just need a conclusion.

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