A Big Surprise

Nice!

Very erotic. One of the best body worshiping stories I've read. You took your time presenting Jack's descent and that was amazingly erotic.

Thanks for writing it and posting it!

Would love to read more about Jack's submissions to Russ. Sounds like Jack is on his way to being an insatiable bottom!

Satisfaction Delivered!

Finally, a well written, dialogue included, story that delivered what the title promised!

The hottest story I've read in a long time

Great buildup, I could feel the desire grow as mine grew too !

Great story

Loved it. I felt the lust growing. Would love to read more.

5 stars

I beg for more!

It was well written and kept me wanting to read more. . I would like that 8 inches in me. . wow!

Wonderful

The pacing of this was fantastic. It was really hot all the way through and delivered right until the end. Fantastic read!

FANTASTIC STORY

This story was great, as good as your other stories. The whole setup of this story is fantastic, the buildup, the growing sexual tension, and the final sexual gratification. I look forward to seeing more of your stories. QUICKLY.

Great story!

Very well written. I could almost feel that 8 incher.

Wonderful.

As a female visitor to the gay stories, I found this thrilling. I am new to literotica (day 1 ) and am having the time if my life exploring the different sections. I would love to see two men together. Hope you guys don't mind me reading through your personal intimate secrets. ;-) Emily.

Hot

Hot sex, wonderful delivery and amazing creation. A really great piece.

That was a really great story. Making me dream of being Jacky. :)

You hit my spot with this one...

Edgy. Sexy as all hell. Sweet. Intense. Satisfying. Perfect in every way.

Hot and fast paced

Excellent - superbly well written to keep you wanting more - and getting it!
A very different story to those I write - almost straight into the sexy side of things with remarkably little build-up.....not that much was needed here!
Loved the dialogue too.
6 stars - well, I would if I could!

So ama zing and perfect! Please more of these two! !!???!!!

Sexy as FUCK!

Wow! That was one hell of a sexy story! Got me so wet! Would love to see more of Russ and Jack! Ow- Jacky! B-)

Sequel?

I want to know if Russ holds to the deal!

Looking forward for sunday

It was fun, hot and romantic. Looking forward for the "SUNDAY ACTION".
Please Harry

more

Man I want to be Jacky so bad I would luv to suck his cock and let him fuck me crazy!

More please

I have blown several loads to this story I would love a sequel.

waiting to hear about their meeting on Sunday

Such a hot story, still waiting to read about their meeting on Sunday.