This was a poor story. It was told, not shown, and BDSM is not mind control.
WOW I about near spit out my beer. That has to be the shortest, right to the point, fuck the bad guy up bad, story I read. Pops out both his eyes?!! I gotta say though, as short as this is, don't you think you could have proofread it just once?
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This was a poor story. It was told, not shown, and BDSM is not mind control.
WOW
I about near spit out my beer.
That has to be the shortest, right to the point, fuck the bad guy up bad, story I read.
Pops out both his eyes?!!
I gotta say though, as short as this is, don't you think you could have proofread it just once?
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