All Comments on 'Blurred Lines'

I thought this story was very well done. The introduction was amazing and had me guessing. The ending was a neat little way to wrap things up and continue things along in the reader's mind. The entire thing overall was clever, a little horrifying, and completely tempting. I loved it.

I enjoyed your story it was a fun, short read. I would have liked to see more horror, but all in all it was a mind-bending story and well written.

Thanks for the read,

Red