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by Anonymous

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by CatherineLinxWhitmon11/19/05

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I thought this story was very well done. The introduction was amazing and had me guessing. The ending was a neat little way to wrap things up and continue things along in the reader's mind. The entire thing overall was clever, a little horrifying, and completely tempting. I loved it.

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by RedHairedandFriendly01/26/06

Nice read

I enjoyed your story it was a fun, short read. I would have liked to see more horror, but all in all it was a mind-bending story and well written.

Thanks for the read,
Red

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