All Comments on 'Seduced'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Yes, rubbish

The story didn't make any sense from start to the terrible finish. Try again. You might have some potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Erm what

Okay that girl was really dumb. It became painful at some point. Too much bs.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

This is a hot story. What happened after? Did Sean follow up and date her? How did she react the next time she saw Mike? Doing it outside in a car park made it super hot, and her first time, too? Wow. Two men, in public, and what will be her second time, then? No doubt it'll be just a bit anti-climatic, unless Sean had something truly special planned. Of course, this is all pure fantasy, I'm sure. You never know, though, with those Australians! Australia wasn't settled by Puritans, like the US was. It must be nice not to have that oppressive culture all around you. 5* ~~ JB

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Did she end up pregnant?

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