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by Anonymous

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by Yet_Another_User06/02/15

I hope you continue to develop this story - I call this a good start.

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by Anonymous06/02/15

Begs for a continuation

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by Pasir06/02/15

Errors

Hello. Firstly upon reading the story, I was horrified to see the amount of errors that I failed to correct. For this I apologize. I will do a better edit for my next story. There will be a continuation of the story. And secondly since I am relatively a noob, I would really appreciate any feedback/suggestions to help improve my writing. Thanks.

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by ag250707/09/16

I knew we were in trouble

...when the first sentence didn't have a verb.

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by tazz31707/09/16

SOONER OR LATER

the twain will meet. TK U MLJ LV NV

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