All Comments on '"Moms & Daughters": A Family Affair'

Thanks for your talent, creativity, time, effort & sharing your stories

There needs to be a Hall of Fame & you deserve to be 1st inductee

In your honor, a monument should be erected

Wait a minute, hold on, never mind, that sounds dirty used here in that context

Thanks for your talent, creativity, time, effort & sharing your stories

There needs to be a Hall of Fame & you deserve to be 1st inductee

In your honor, a monument should be erected

Wait a minute, hold on, never mind, that sounds dirty used here in that context

You are one of my favorite authors and for good reasons! Stories are hot and fun to read. Only thing you could do to heat this story up more would have been to have real people, not drawings, for your illustrations. Now that would ramp it up about 50 notches! Congratulations on your milestone of stories!

.. favourite artist, favourite kink.... pity I can only give this 5!

Morlan502 said "Only thing you could do to heat this story up more would have been

to have real people, not drawings, for your illustrations."

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I am afraid that you are mistaken Morlan502.

Just as reality can never match your imagination,

Good iLUSTrations do not have the natural limitations

of human body and natural laws and so are

always better than "real people" trying to enacting a story.

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Dear SilkStockingsLover,

I am not into lesbian porn, but really enjoyed this story!

OMG! hope that I am not turning gay :)

I think that I will finally have to come out of the Lurking mode, in order to give the points etc for this!

Why do you not illustrate some of your great mother/son tales as well ???

That is not fair.

Art excellent, especially the black and white drawings.

Story not so much.

Great Story - Happy 200th! Now where's the next one?

My favorite Literotica author teamed with my favorite comic artist writing a REALLY HOT story about multi generational kinky incest. YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!! In the words of every subbie everywhere "MORE. PLEASE?

thanks to all the comments.

As for male members... I have one more finished novella with Rebecca art and it is about MILF's who slut it up with younger men.

It will be out in August.

Jasmine June 2015

I always laugh when a man who obviously works hard enough to let a house full of women to be lazy hedonists is suddenly revealed to be a spineless cuckold. Really? That's the kind of go getter that succeeds in business? He makes enough money that his wife and daughters can skip any sort of work and fuck around, but the best he can manage to maintain control of his own home (that they obviously are just leeching around) is confusion and obedience? I call bullshit.

As for the "story", it's allright. Nothing but a string of sex scenes really. There isn't anything that resembles conflict in it, so it can't honestly be considered anything more than gonzo porn in written form. You do know how to write stroke scenes though.

Another great story Jasmine. Thanks for the 200th erotic story.

I've tried finding Rebecca as an Author and came up empty. Also tried searching her stories and also came up empty. Any help finding her site would be appreciated. Thanks.

Dear Silkstockinglover,

Thanks for one incredibly delightful, hot and hysterically funny "Pussy Munching Saga." Pay no mind to Verbicide or any other guys who don't get it. Most of us loved "Moms and Daughters." Those critical of your work probably can't distinguish between fantasy and realism and didn't appreciate your ending which was inspired. Critics often reveal more about themselves and their petty prejudices than their insights into a work. So kind of you to respond by reminding your male fans of up coming stories that may interest them more. I'm new to your work and I've got a lot of reading ahead of me.Also keeping my eye out and my zipper open for you novella.

Best Wishes,

thebigdripper

I wish you would write another Straight White Girls fantasy please

Another winner from Jasmine. Where might I find Rebecca's works?

Hi,

Please search rebeccahap for more of her work.

Jasmine,

You've got to do some kind of sequel to this, it's worth it. BTW I've got majority of Rebecca's comics and they're VERY well done.

Artwork is so much better than average

Damn the taboo and naughtiness combined with the pics showing mother-daughter love made this my favorite lesbian story.

Loved this story! The only thing wrong is it's to long for a single story. Would have been better if it came out in chapters. Plus not a fan of the ending. Having said that would like to see the story about the seduction of the in-laws. Keep up the great work.

My favourite writer and my favourite artist!!!

Enough said.

I normally like longer stories. Ones that have an actual story. It was just an overly long string of sex scenes. The dialogue was ham-fisted preaching. Limitless lesbian hedonism good and everything else bad. Not even one female out of this bunch had the ovaries to say pussy doesn't do it for me? It goes from fantasy to cartoon, and I don't mean the illustrations. Prime example of less being more, a robust editing would improve it immensely.

Great pictures. I really enjoyed this story. Had me hard and pulled myself off wilst reading it. Yes I spayed cum allover my hands and balls wishing I was there.

More please with plenty of pictures.

Thanks silkstockingslover you write the best of stories.

Mike

I have loved your work for a long time. This is hands down my favorite story of your many excellent ones. Rebecca's pictures is like frosting on a tasty cake. Thanks for the excellent story!

I give this a three. I'm just really not sure how I feel about this. Cloe is not just a Domme, she is a bitch. Seducing women, not women she wanted, but just because she could. She took another cheerleader's mother by force and the mother had nothing to do with her daughter's actions. It was just a revenge fuck. They make fun of the Father's penis on the small side, when in reality a smaller penis is perfect for anal sex. Much less pressure needed to penetrate, no pain involved, and less chance of tearing delicate anal tissues. With an older woman (his mother, obviously) who might have the beginnings of 'rroids, the less trauma the better and still achieve the pleasure. Deborah's actions precipitated a split with her mother when nothing should be allowed to come between family. Deb was young and would have many pets in her life, Rose had found someone and had the opportunity to live overseas and mix with the edges of the Royal Family and Deb would try to deny her that. Chloe took her mother's secretary just because she could. The woman had several children and a husband and she hadn't gone looking for the relationship. Yes, Chloe is just a mean-hearted person and Deb is too weak a parent to keep her daughter's bitchy machinations in check. Too much manuvering in this story for places in the pecking order. Chloe is clearly the head Domme here, but a good Mistress loves and cares for each of her Subs though she might have to enforce clearly defined rules on occasion. Every Sub needs to know how very loved and cared for she/he is by her Mistress. For their loyalty, she needs to commit to their welfare and protection. Therefore they can submit to her without fear and with total abandonment of self. This could have been extremely erotic, but in the end is not. And Blackmail never has a place anywhere. Anyone who would make use of intimate images for their own Power games has something wrong. Blackmail isn't about the sex, like rape it is always about Power and Hatred.

While I have enjoyed and praised all of your stories this one is a step above all of your most recent entries. While Rebecca's art certainly helped, this was the first of your stories in a while I just couldn't stop touching myself to. The length is perfect as all of these stories were great and needed to be told, the art was perfectly matched up, and while the number of Mistresses/slaves were huge we saw small intimate interactions. Bravo! I absolutely loved Deborah and my only complaint is that Chloe (whom I loved to hate) became the to Mistress. FIVE STARS!

I liked this better than any of your other exciting posts. The illustrations made this story so much more fun to read. I loved it.

Thanks to REBECCA for the excellent art work. Beautifully drawn and well illustrates the story at the point where used. Really adds to the story.

Absolutely the best story I have ever read on this site and I especially loved the art work provided it really brought the story to life.

Several parts of the written portion of the story were too Hokey! It obviously was not proofread before publication. It was readable, though.

However, the artwork more than made up for those discrepancies in the wording. Many of the drawings looked almost like a professional artist did them. A few of them looked almost like taken from photographs. Most were scaled properly, and matched the verbiage well. Good job all around. 5*s

Your stories and Rebecca's artwork perfectly compliment each other. I look forward to many more joint efforts.

you should do another illustrated story like this a second one

This story is the most gross thing ever. I don't understand how people could like this.

A BLONDE IS IN IT.

LOL jk awesome story. Great drawings.

The best incestuous lesbian story I have ever read! Especially with the magnificent illustrations of Rebecca.

I wish you could develop another delightful story with other specialists lesbian sex artists like Amy Matthews, or the art of Grigio?

This is Literotica, not a soap box. The point of erotica is to turn people on, not piss them off.

This story was so good it took me two weeks to read because the words kept getting messy.....

Lovely Story Dear Jasmine!

Congrats for yours lovely # 200 Stories and specially for this one about Lesbian Incest and for the Grandma participation mmmmmm

Lesbian Incest is the Best!

I love the fact you add the Grandmother into this loving story!

We do not see it often here in Literotica.

Would love to see more stories with Older Ladies in Lingerie in a very close family love relationship, like Grandmothers, Mothers-in-law and Aunties mmmmm

And maybe, if you want, make the Older Women the Dominant role and character mmmmmmm

This Story needs a Sequel! And a more participation for the Grandmother, Aunties and maybe, the Mothers-in-law mmmmm

I´m a 54yo mature Lesbian Aunt in a very close love relantionship with my own Aunt since my teens, and I can assure you all that my loving Aunt, at 76yo still is a Great loving Lover! mmmmmm

Thank you for yours ALL loving Stories and for some Great Wet wet Moments of Big "O" True Pleasures mmmmmmm

Must change my pants now .... they are all Wet!

Aunt Helena

54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal

I am a big fan of yours and you never disappoint. This story had me hooked. My panties are still wet!!! Great great job.

Great story with perfect artwork. Loved the shifting power and storyline. I plan on reading some of your other stuff.

Loved it getting wanked and sucked reading about cunt lapping cunts, then fucking and sucking my two girlfriend half to death. Totally drunk on cunt juice, fucking wonderful, need at least two days to recover. I absolutely adore cunt, eating cunt tongue fucking cunt and drinking cunt nectar, doing all these things while up to my balls in cunt. Your partner must spend all his spare time totally blissed out and fucked up.

Why do some stories fail to get the conversational portions properly executed? If one is speaking and is being quoted there are correct ways and then there are incorrect ways. This story had far too many which were the latter rather than the former. I will give a generic example to make it more obvious.

A person speaking about their own self would likely say, "Eat mommy's pussy." That works as thw person speaking is mommy and ahe wants the person to eat her pussy. It makes no sense for mommy to say, "Eat your mommy's pussy." The mommy and the eater know the pussy is that of their mom, so why would the your need to be included? Who speaks in such a manner? No one apart from bad actresses in low budget porn. I am not speaking of the quotes from someone else speaking about mommy to their daughter, because using your in that context would fit.

I have noticed when comments are left by fans of a writer a great deal gets overlooked in the story. Ratings are more generous and anyone giving honest feedback is called, "hater" or "jealous" by said fans. This is not the ass kissing section, and most writers are more than capable of sticking up for their own work and choices in dialogue. I'd rather read a reply from the writer than one from someone incapable of distinguishing the difference between constructive criticism and trolling.

I happen to be a fan of some stories written by this writer, so I know I will enjoy future stories also. I look forward to reading more. The illustrations were well done, and the choices fit with the written scenes very well. That must have been a huge undertaking!

Hi

To the last commenter,

Good point. I'll have to go and check my upcoming illustrated story as I am sure I do that in that story too....

That said, such trivial errors really shouldn't impact your enjoyment of the story that much.

This is erotica, not Shakespeare.

It is free and no one, the editors or myself are getting paid.

Jasmine 2015

That all said, a good point.

it may come as a huge surprise to you that i have copied your stories MILF SEDUCTRESS and CATCHING MOMMY on MS Word and illustrated them with Rebecca's illustrations a year back, to give the feel of an illustrated story. was stunned to see that you and she know each other and you actually did a combination. you both are geniuses in your respective fields. love this combination. ask her to illustrate all your stories. it has the most mind blowing effect. Both the stories were and are still the best. as i follow you on twitter i am aware of all your stories. you still have not been able to beat these two stories in matter of erotica and arousal. i feel you both should join hands to do an exclusive graphic novel with the balloon writing done by you and illustrations by Rebecca. this could be the best sellout in the history of graphic novels~ @ ravieravan4

You are one of the better writers and I think Rebecca's sketch art is awesome. I think that she must have a good knowledge of anatomy. Good work.

I like this, but I don't love it. The idea is good, but there is just too much, or rather, too many. Why would Chloe wish to domme her mother? It will change the dynamic in the household and like her mother and grandmother, can end in a rift between them. Chloe obviously doesn't want to be a Mistress, she just enjoys the humiliation. She doesn't respect her Subs, and it takes a strong person to be a good sub. This seems to be more about hate and humiliation and power play than sex or love. If Chloe really enjoys the Power Games and Hates and feels the need to Humiliate those she has authority over, why doesn't she just join run for a government office. That way she'd be getting paid to plot, play head games, put down her friends as well as adversaries and dictate the rules of the games. The black and white drawings are very well done during the early portion of the story, the color drawings of approximately page 4 and over have less depth and draw me in much less. They especially illustrate the cruelty of Chloe. I find I like the concept, but it is poorly done. Stories of bi-sexual or Lesbian relationships I enjoy, but this just turned me off. Every time I went to another page I found something else to disgust me. At the very first, the way Amanda kowtows to her youngert sister is sickening. Her mother, Deborah, didn't allow Amanda to discover her sexuality and her own proclivities, she used her authority as the mother, in her 'obey me' voice to practically force her daughter to eat her. She obtained a agreement from her daughter to be her 'pet' while her daughter was in the midst of sexual desire. A place where one doesn't always think straight This story has so many problems that I think I'll quit right here.....

Great story. I read every one and was turned on with every word. I hope all the rest of your stories are asgood as this one.

Good writing, good premise but repetitive sameness gets to be boring. The inclusion of the cartoons lighten the writing but cannot cover the repetitive lack of imagination after the first chapter.

:)

It's not a novel, but it is "novel"! I loved the pencil sketches - by far the best artist. I assume you had a series of pics and wrote the text to match. That takes skill, either way.

AWESOME

i thoroughly enjoyed the story, especially Amanda's transition from sub to more of a dom role. I was mostly just confused at the fact it seemed Chloe took control over mom for the "first time" two separate times which was confusing. otherwise i thought it was awesome!

Epic!

The best, I am still hard

A great adventure told with multiple story lines and beautifully illustrated.

Definitely one of the best

One of your best, personally I always click on any new story written by `silkstockinglover' as I know that I won't be disappointed and that any that are illustrated will have the best illustrations in them. Congratulations on your 200th, hope there are many more to come.

Way to win another award. This time best illustrated story.

A great big thank you to all who read, voted and supported this story to winning 2015 Illustrated story of the year.

A special thank you to Rebecca for her artwork and I'm looking forward to more collaborations with her. (Be sure to check out her work!)

Be sure to check out the first 2 of 12 chapters of 1950s... an epic story that will go through 50 years of lesbian incest in one family.

JASMINE

It's an awesome story :)

Great story. You had me coming while I played with my pussy when reading the story. Write more like this. I really enjoy your work especially when they make me pleasure myself.

Thanks,

Julie.

The combination of an incredibly hot story with wonderful illustrations make this another top notch effort from one of the best Literotica writers whose works I have ever had the pleasure to read.

i am addicted to this story, i read it in the day time now, dont care about getting caught.

Read a page and exercise my right hands grip and thinking you are a very vivid brilliant writer. And the fact the ladies are not cgi makes it so much better.

Let me begin by saying I liked the story and loved the illustrations. Now for the critics who picked the story apart for it's lack of realism; this is erotica we're enjoying some of our fantasies and if we're lucky getting material for our jilling off sessions. So relax and try to enjoy these stories for what they are.

As ever, an erotic tale, with deep; familial; girl on girl incestuous action. The whole story flowed from seduction to seduction almost seamlessly. Enhanced beautifully; I might add; by The spectacular illustrations from Rebecca. Plaudits to both of you, you are remarkably gifted women.

The 10 chapters were a praise worthy episode of a new pictorial sensational lesbian-incest filled love fest of obviously heated passionate mother-daughter-grandmother-son integrated into a demonstration of the best of all the vaginal moistening, penis-stiffening, and naughty but oh so nice family of the best incestuous natural and slu-loving cunt-loving , strap on , mother fucking, enjoyable presentation ever put down on script that SILKSTOCKINGLOVER ever impressed me with! I'm so excited about this new version of this tag. The author really out did many of the other stories with deliciously including the pictorial imagination of the hot bitches. Impressively done.

The story was intriguing and kept me interested and wondering what will happen next. The illustrations were perfect for the story. Nicely done for sure.

Keep on writing... really enjoy your stories

would like them to be wearing stockings in illustrations

Turned me on, thanks for another great one!

A little long but so worth it! Makes me want to sit down and write about my real life mother daughter experience! But, unfortunately I managed to get a four year degree without being able to string two coherent sentences together!

Loved it Randi

A truly hot story. I couldn't keep my hands off of my cock and balls

You should think about doing professional writing

The story is amazing I loved it

Me and my husband absolutely love this....it reminds me of times spent with my mom my sister and my 5 aunts and 4 female cousins......shortly after i turned 18 we all met at my aunt ellens and we had a lesbian orgy...before this i had only had lesbian incest with my sister and 2 of the cousins and my aunt esther...we have a rule of no participation till 18 and you wanna do it....my aunt esther broke the rule but only me her and her daughter kristy knew about it....kristy was 17 and i was 13 and i stayed the night at my aunts....she was gone and me and kristy were hanging out...and kristy began asking me if i had a boyfriend...i told her no...she a a girlfriend...i said heck no....she said why you say it like that...i said that i didnt think that would be interesting...and she said why and i said because its a woman and she doesnt have the right equipment....kristy said be right back....she comes back a few minutes later naked from the waist down wearing a strap on...she says women have better equipment....she sits next to me...i was examining the strap on when i noticed the harness had a split showing her pussy to me...seeing her pussy made me start getting wet....kristy says so you change your mind yet ....i said maybe so...i asked what does it feel like and she said touch it....i reach out touch it and keep my hand there...but as i did i felt my pinky touching her pussy....kristy asked....have you ever had sex....i told her yes...she asked with who....i told her jake and one other person...she said a man??? I said yes she said who...i said i couldnt say...she said did grandpa fuck you too....i asked how she figured that out....she said he fucked her when she was 12...i said he did me at 10 anally 11 vaginally....she said youve never even fooled around with your brother...i said no she said she had fucked her moms boyfriends for the last 3 years....she asked if i wanted to try her strap on....i said yes i guess so but give me a minute....i went to the bedroom and stripped naked....my pussy was dripping wet....kristy then comes in the room naked as well and the strap on in her hand....she said we will use this later i wanna show you something first.....we lay on the bed and begin kissing she is pinching my nipples....then her hands find my wetness....she said fuck you want this dont you....she lays me back and eats my wet slit....her tongue was amazing...she had me cumming in no time...then she strapped on the dildo again...she had me get in whatever position i wanted....i got on all fours...she slid in her dildo and began fucking me....we fucked for bout 25 minutes....till we noticed kristys mom....she said what are you girls doing....kristy says having some fun...esther says kat im gonna get naked and join you and kristy....but you cant tell anyone about this....kristy says yes supposed to wait till your 18...but i been doing this with mom since i was 12....esther then undresses and joins me in the bed kristy lines up and slides the strap on in her moms pussy....while esther ate me....i never told anybody and had only did that with esther just those 5 days i spent the night...but kristy happened a good bit more....me and my sister had been touching each other since i was 8 and she was 9....thanks for bringing back great memories

I loved the story and it was a real turn on but the ending was really disappointing with the way you had the father being a really big ass wimp. I can't believe that very many men would respond the way he did. I think most fathers would have joined in or threw all of them out into the street... It would really take a real pussy to accept the results that you put in the story...It would have been a much bigger turn on if he had joined in and fucked them and got a blow job.No way in hell would he have gone to the basement in shame and if he was that weak he might as well blow his brains out. What kind of family would treat their loving father that way???? Everything i liked about the women up until the end was destroyed by their cold and uncaring attitude toward the father, son, brother and husband. I can understand the wife turning away and leaving him cold but not his daughters, sisters and mother....really a BAD, BAD ENDING!!!!

Please continue I want to know what happens next

I gave you a four star, because of the ending.

Would have been 5 stars if it had ended with the Dad just joining in.

I was truly pulled into the story and instinctively was clinching and releasing my cunt muscles giving me these micro orgasms without me even touching myself.. I was delirious towards the end until the men came home.. Didn't like that part.. Luv

i was really having a great time reading this well written well paced story til the ending,,what a letdown and disappointment,, father is a wimp with a little pecker and relegated to the cellar,,,the guy makes a living so everyone else can stay home and fuck and play,, i don't think so,, bad mistake to put down men that way.

This is a very good story, but quite a bit repetitive. Towards the end, it was not much more than an effort to guess who was next in the dominance game.

good story but let down the dad should of have been more of a man and told them to go to hell and got his stuff and left, he works hard so they can stay home and have sex. if he filled for divorced he could of gotten it all, she was cheating on him.

Loved it. Looking forward to reading all of your stories

I congratulate you sincerely my dear silkstockingslover

This story is one of the best I've read about the intense incestuous lesbian relationships of a family and her circle of friends, and is brilliantly illustrated by Rebecca's delightful illustrations. A very inspiring story!

I hope you can create other stories with the other illustrations of Rebecca, on topics of sodomization and BDSM games... there is a great variety!

The concept of multi-generational lesbian incest and the changing dynamics involved was excellent. I loved the blend in the story of domination, submission, reluctance and seduction. Thank you for this great story.

Superior Females.

What a great story - completely 'wrapped-up!'

Second story I read of yours today. Holding off cumming until wife goes to bed. AmazingAmazing

stories of mothers teaching their daughters the joys of making each other happy are my favorites and you have at least two fantastic stories on the subject that i have found thanks do some more if you can love you

I'm working on a story that requires pictures. How do you get the images in the story. I really enjoy your stories.

that's all I did for the whole book and I read the entire book in one sitting... I made a lot of awesome sauce as I read..... thanks great story

You have a talent unlike most, as I have yet to read a bad story by You!

Haven't been able to put it down once I started to read it. THANK YOU

Great story about lesbian incest. It kept my interest, since I had to go to several appointments while reading it. Loved the planning by Chloe to turn the house hierarchy on its head. Amanda and Chloe are going to turn a lot more teens and MILFs before they leave for college.

Very outstanding lesbian story. I find lesbian stories if well written are very erotic to read and very exciting as movies or videos. I do have a problem with the use of the term sluts, not just in this story but in many I have read. The lady (female) is usually one of the strongest contributors in the different stories, but as soon as she has contributed her max, she is suddenly began to be called a slut. It doesn't make sense to receive gratifying satisfaction and then call the one that satisfied a slut.

I genuinely LOVED this Story!! GREAT Work!!

Only thing I Might have changed would have been the corruption of Young, 18 yr old, Deborah (with her Neighbor), and 18 yr old Amanda. by giving each them their own Mind blowing orgasm; making them MORE 'compliant'/less resistant to defiance as Mistress-Mommy & Neighbor FORCED each of them to Eat pussy first.

You're a wonderful writer and you give me vagina envy. There's nothing else to say.

love the lesbian stories so satisfying.from grandma to niece, it sure makes me feel good. i had to read this entire series before quitting for the day. i'm sure i would make an excellent pet.

Oh Jasmin another great story.. I wish I was your male pet.. k

Why is it that good, kind men always get abused by fucking slutty women?

Can't a wife who stays home and does nothing appreciate and love her husband?

You have a really nasty imagination. I love it!

Was hoping to see more with the secretary from work, even in the work setting. Which would be domme? Perhaps a future vignette.

Absolutely monumental, l have six sisters who are all over 18 who all fuck and eat each other’s cunts every day /night. They collect cunt juice from each other in a glass for me to drink while I play with you cock while watching them play with each other. We all got a little drunk one weekend and they let me lick their clits till they orgasmed and I passed out from sexual over load. They then made me watch while they had a girly daisy chain, making me cum and nearly pass out again. Cunt crazed fucker U.K. More and more like this Jasmine please.