All Comments on 'Her Orgasm'

Another great story! I love all three of your stories on this site. Thanks for writing and sharing them with us.

Your stories get better and better. Excellent! Hope you treat us to more soon.

I do like stories where the character broadens his or her perspective from somewhere very restricted to a much more adventurous outlook.

Your story here explores Danni's journey through each phase and then leaves room for further exploration.

Well written.

L

I rarely leave comments, however this is such a well crafted piece of erotica that I will make an exception.

Believable, hot and sexy. Will there be a part two?

Not my usual fare here, but WOW!

Nicely visualized, I'm certain there is more to see. The artist, how can he work not knowing where things are, boring but essential.

Danni should be glad fo have heeded her sisters advice, not the libraian any longer but a cunning model and living life .

A great story, by a great story-teller. It built slowly but reached the climax at just the right time. Very enjoyable

This is one of the top 5 stories I've read on this site and I have read literally several thousand up to now. Keep up the great work!

A great piece of writing. I look forward to reading the next Chapter.

Great stuff!

Wonderful, intelligent story

Accidentally landed here and loved it.

Waiting and wanting for more!

Thank you

Tom

I feel like the artistic work you're referencing with Danni was Clayton Cubitt's series Hysterical Literature. (You can find it on Youtube)

wonderfully written and hysterically coincidental

One of the best written erotic stories I've read in a very long time.

Excellent job.

One word says it all.

...this one best of your stories, and added it to my favorites... I don't have many of those!

Again, very well written. I don't really have to say that though... you scores speak for themselves!

M142

Bradley called the artists "assholes". He's the asshole. I would love to watch my woman as Danni was. A 5 star effort.

xxxhugsxxx

That was fantastic. THANK YOU Althea.

Excellent story. Pulses all the way to my own pussy reading this. Thank you

Thanks Althea, I just reread it after 11/20/2015. ( Just checking for continuity ha ha )

= 1 star total for this darky taler

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...and not a voyeur from Berne.

This short is intricate in its crafting and plot, with multiple layers of detail and complexity for those that seek them out.

The dialogue has lovely harmonies with few dissonances, and those few, I'm positive, are intentional and deliberate, and are examples of true speech.

It's also a genuine pleasure to read work on this site with correct grammar, syntax, and punctuation, in these days of "Well, you knew what I meant!" used as an excuse of not knowing a participle from a gerund.

The story is lovely, and very ingaging and original -- Dorthy Parker might have penned it.

Althea, you are a pleasure to read and an ornament to the site. Brava!

(And, BTW, I am a member. I just don't have my password with me on this trip. I'm user-named QuietShyLibrarian.)

Add another WOW to your collection!

I assume this is about Hegre-art? I can't tell you how hot I think those videos are! You're an excellent writer. Keep them coming!

More of this storyline, please. :)

I know of this Art. Amazing and very erotic. Very good presentation!

This is a well written story, and hotter than blazes. When I see a story here that is so well done it always amazes me since so many people either can't write, spell, or use grammar. And besides, most of them make sex really pornographic while this is really erotica and that is awesome.

Thanks for a wonderful story!

Ted

Different, but very erotic.

I liked it a lot.

Magic, erotic, creatively crafted imaginings.

Your mind is so delicious and sensually evocative.

How do you do that - make me want to find that studio, pub and people?

This set up is such a fun idea....

The sexual tension builds at a more reasonable pace than a lot of stories, and the author spends more time on how the characters actually feel. Author does a much better jobs creating and building interesting characters than the typical story.

You are an amazing storyteller. The character development and pacing are perfect. So very erotic!

You continue to titillate my emotions with this saga I must have missed last time I read your stories. Keep em cumming.

I generally don't like reading first-person narrative, but this was excellent. A very different story line and nicely told. Now I've got to go back and read anything else by this author!

I have read hundreds of stories on Literotica; exciting ones, lame ones. Descriptive ones, tame ones. But I have never read a story that pulled me in like that, that made me want to follow the storyline like that. Excellent writing, the first person perspective handled extremely well, which is no mean feat. How can I give a rating of six, please?

great plot, superbly written, with sensitivity and horniness in equal parts.

I hope there are more coming, pun wholly intended.

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I rate this story 5 out of 5 hard-ons.

This is a well crafted story! The images and sexuality built within the dialogue is wonderful. That it ties to an actual set of real recordings makes it that much more exciting. Definitely a 5.

As many readers have stated before me, WOW!. If this story is based on Clayton Cubitt's series Hysterical Literature, then, your interpretation of his work is indeed the sincerest form of flattery. Well done.

well done, very plausible story line and enjoyed it!

I love reading this story again. Wish I could give it another 5*.

Oh, what a sexy story! Increasing in tempo as it went along.

Love to have been a part of the scene!

Thanks