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Humiliated at My Son's Party

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/03/15

TRASH

where are they going to put the body when he's bled out.
waste of space/time/ energy hd space.

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by Anonymous06/03/15

Loser bullshit!

Reliving your childhood fantasies here, gay bullshit and falling short, no more in the future thanks!

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by Anonymous06/03/15

funny dream

like any man he should have left called a lawyer an had her ass thrown in jail let sonny boy fend for himself.

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by Anonymous06/03/15

*

"Prone" means on one's stomach. "Supine" means on one's back. Get it right.

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by Anonymous06/03/15

LOVE TO-BE STANLEY

Great love to-be cuckold fagot and sissy husband to-be used by all and do cleanup on all holes YUM YUM YUM

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by Anonymous06/03/15

hmm never

Not sure I would do that im sure my 9m with 17 shots would of got chosen instead of a dick.

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by Necroclown31306/03/15

I'm not even sure what to say... Not what I was expecting. I'll be more constructive than most the people on here. There were consistency issues you need to keep an eye out for and minor grammar problems. Prob just a slow proof read before hand.

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by Anonymous06/04/15

complete garbage

seriously, why waste your time? If you're not bright enough to create a plot that is even lightly plausible then JUST DON'T WRITE! You just come across like a moron.

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by gdjohn5206/04/15

I couldnt finish as soon as it all went queer, Disgusting

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by Anonymous06/04/15

Hot! More!

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by Anonymous06/04/15

But

You certainly can write whatever fantasy you like, but I suggest you give some thought for your next one as to whether living human adults would respond this way in the setting in which you have placed them. People do goofy and disgusting things, but at a party with teenagers would it be even possible for the parents to act in the way you have written?

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by Anonymous06/04/15

Pretty fucking disgusting to see sexually frustated heterofascist scum going rabid over the possibility of gay incest in an incest story. Bunch of Josh Duggar's who should be banned from this site

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by Mclovin697806/04/15

Fu king stupid

Garbage u suck this was a waste of time

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by Anonymous06/05/15

Awwww Poor Homophobes

So all the homophobes here think it's perfectly normal to read stories about guys fucking their moms, but once it turns "queer" you're all suddenly disgusted? What a bunch of hypocrite losers. As for the author, all I can say is, keep up the good work, you got me off twice!

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by PolyLvr06/05/15

no problem

With the gay or the incest
The problem I have is with the believability. The man has no gay tendencies, yet all of a sudden he enjoys extreme gay acts. Going from an anal virgin to getting fisted in a matter of hours cannot be done without ripping and tearing. There's no way a man could put his fist in his anus, up to his elbow, without causing major damage.
I predict hubby won't have to worry about the usurper or his whore wife because he's gonna be dead before dawn. I hope he lives long enough to change the beneficiaries of his insurances. After supporting his family for decades they turn on him like that? They deserve nothing.
Finally, how can a woman who supposedly loves her husband get to that level of humiliation? Even if he was meagerly endowed and a bit of a dolt, he didn't deserve that.

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by Anonymous06/07/15

Loved it

a great story. These people hating on it don't know what they're talking about n

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by devilspy06/20/15

Well done for first story

You write well and cuckold serviced all of them well. After all, what married MILF would not want a stable of hot hung young teen cock fucking them. Now you need to do a chapter two. With cuckold in chasity, as his wife and he visit an adult video store and service studs at the glory hole and in the booth. Look forward to more bi stories from you.

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by BetterEnding07/28/15

In The Future

How about a little truth in advertising? This should have been in the Gay category and the description leaves a lot to be desired. You could have avoided my 1 star rating if those had been correct because I would never have skimmed the story.

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by Anonymous09/12/15

Well that was ugly

It's bad enough reading stories about some spineless husband watching his wife have sex with another man. But when the other man becomes his son and his friends and they are raping him, what the fuck could have possibly been running through the husbands head that would have in any way made this okay? The outcome is lots of people are going to prison and lots of lives are going to be ruined. Why? Because the husband is going to the hospital to have emergency surgery on his badly torn sphincter muscle. And guess what the hospital is going to do? Run a rape kit. And look at all the DNA evidence they're going to give the Police. I wonder which of the boys will rat out the others first in order to get a sweetheart deal with the prosecution? Meanwhile his wife, his son and the rest of them will be in jail, awaiting a trial that will ruin all their lives. End to one of the worst stories its ever been my misfortune to read. PS - this belongs in Gay male you idiot.

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by Anonymous10/27/15

double teamed

Really hot and NASTY, good work!

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by Anonymous12/02/15

Stanley couldn't stand the humiliation.

I have no idea officer, my husband seemed like everything was fine last night. He didn't seem upset, or under any kind of pressure. I can't even begin to imagine how he could have gotten all that semen up his rectum? Whatever he must have become, it must have been to much of a strain on him? The doctor thinks it was a heart attack that killed him.

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by Anonymous04/14/16

Can you say jail?

Get your ass up, get dressed and go directly to the police station, give the detective the name of every single one of those sick bastards...go to the hospital and have a rape kit collected. Go home shower, get dressed go to the bank take every single dime out and close the accounts...get a divorce lawyer and divorce the bitch for rape and adultry. Go home pack all your shit and get tbe fuck away from those sick people.

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by fr4510/30/16

Funny story!

I don't normally like cuckold stories when the husband turns gay but this story was funny as hell and obviously not intended to be an erotic story. 5*

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by Anonymous02/07/17

Good start, hard to believe at end

I thought it was well written at the beginning, good set up to the sex. Would have thought there would have been a little more protest at the gay stuff at first and the arm and baseball bat are totally unbelievable. I noticed several requests for another story... perhaps a prequel on how mom and son got started and how they brought others into their group all behind dads back.

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