White Heat

Great story.

Very well written.
Great dialog.
Looking forward to next chapter.
However, does Jason know his wife is a slut for Mr. Duke?
Is she still having relations with here husband?
Would love to see these questions answered in the next chapter.
I for one, sure hope there is one to follow.

So hot!

Great dialogue, especially the thoughts going through her head. Man, that is one erection-building story. More, please!

MORE!

Love the story. Please continue with it. I'd like to see how far he can take her.

Love the submissive Asian theme

Hope you continue this story with many more chapters.

Nit Picking

I really like your writing and your characters. 5 Stars. But:
page 2 would have been a lot better if it involved her embarrassment when other people at the party saw her submission. I'd have liked a scene where Jason returns with those papers he was sent to fetch, and people mock him for what he doesn't know about what Duke did. Jason has been thoroughly humiliated but doesn't know it. Mr. Duke is not the type to resist rubbing Jason's face in it.

Wow

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica! Your dialogue is extremely well written. I look forward to reading your next story whether it's a sequel or original.

Super hot!!

Absolutely smokin' hot. Would love to hear some more adventures featuring Ms Kwan.

Pheeww....

Just the hottest Literotica story ever. Loved their wonderful chemistry. Her unbridled lust for this wonder-bull, her husband's super-hung, ultra virile old boss.

But we need more. Jason needs to watch and learn how a real man gives his lovely young wife extreme pleasure and makes her his. Victoria is the perfect mom for he old man's tenth child!

A simple request.

MORE.

Dear Little Miss Behaving

Thank you so much for this wonderful, sexy story. Mr. Duke has made me dripping wet.

I am a young woman. Very normal. At least I feel so. And I appear to be so. My sex life is very hetero, very average and very straight. My boyfriend is my age. My last one was too. Their personalities are gentle.

My fantasy lover is not young. He is not gentle. Mr. Duke is the personification of my fantasies.

I love your other stories too. Your protagonists have wimp husbands. They have - so far - not learnt about their wives' infidelity and desires.

I really really think it would be lovely if "White heat" had a sequel. Surely Jason suspects something is going on. Surely Vicki is unable to hide her huge crush on their old boss.

I really really think it would be lovely if Jason gets to watch his wife cuck him with this incredible superior male specimen.

Mr. Duke.

It would turn Jason on no end.

A sequel? Please?

Amazing story need more maybe one were she puts jason in place n leaves him

good job

You may be an Asian whore but self-hating? Naw. Great story, hot and well crafted. Nicely done.

Reaally hit.

Would love to see Jason watch some of the sex.

Alos more details ofher threesomes and sex with other people.

Thanks again

Enjoying this one (haven't even finished it yet) as much as the other two. Still hoping for a sequel to Football Sunday, but either way, hope you keep cranking out the stories.

A+

Really enjoyed your story.

Thanks

Holy smokes, Ms. Kwan!

Jeez, what a fucking hot story! Great stuff. More soon

Excellent work!

more stories about Vicki! She is so friking hot! Loved the ending we need to hear about the weekend with Mr Reynolds! You opened the door for so many stories! Girl on girl, gang banging Vicki, tell us how much she loves cock now!

Dude

that's internalized racism

sequel

This deserves a sequel! Great writing style and superb dialog.

Truly excellent!

I wonder, if her flat-chested mother is similarly...unsatisfied. Obviously she'd need a pair of bolt-ons to get Mr. Duke's attention, but with her daughter earning great money that shouldn't be a real problem...

So erotic and your words truly hit a nerve deep inside me. Thank you and keep writing

Very sexy

and goes a little way towards compensating for those 1,000s of stories on this site out to humiliate the white male at the hands of the BMWF sexual encounter.

Great Story

I love the asian and white theme. I feel overloaded with all the asian and black stories. Innocent asian gets corrupted, resists, loves it and becomes a hardcore slut. Wow! Love it. Sequel please!!!

More please

This is such a well written , hot story that is just screaming out for more chapters and kinky adventures.

Well Written

I like your snarky voice and apathetic attitude in this piece. I could not relate to the desire to be fucked by the arrogant Mr. Duke, so that part of the story was a little difficult to take, but the story was a good one. I will have to check out your other stories as well.

Little Miss Behaving

You are just a slut, and I love it, I wish I married you. I can definitely see a follow up to this story. Maybe Mr Reynolds's Grandson has a bucks party, and they want a slut to gang bang.. Keep writing you good thing.