I'm fairly certain I'm the PWD you mentioned in your prologue . This story is beautiful, thoughtful, erotic, romantic, non pitying, positive, sexy and empowering. I have a lump in my throat. This story is a gift. Thank you.
It might be that this is too sensitive for me to have a good perspective - pretty much a life-time wheeler myself - but I saw his attitude toward her as condescending and pitying. He seemed focused on her fragile, broken body (I think those were the words used) rather on the woman. It just didn't work for me. Sorry.
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Anonymous06/05/15
excellent!
I was moved and warmed. Empathetic kink with spirit. Good!
I love your writing it’s like a dream; languid and vivid in equal measure, slow considered, poetic. And I like the way you develop your characters. And the mystery and the way your writing is so in the moment (at least in this story) and the way you don’t lay it all on the table straight away.
Although I’m not a wheelchair user it seems your account of being one and becoming emotionally entangled with one is very perceptive, some of your insights really made me think. A Beautiful story, looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.
The beauty of your story is not mere glamour; it lies in the vividness of the characters and the bravery and sensitivity that they bring to each other. Thank you for opening my eyes...
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Anonymous03/11/16
Gorgeous
I am a wheelchair user. You have a great sense of what it means. She is beautifully seen, strong and vulnerable. I have never thought to include my disability in my writing, but you inspire to. I will write and post. Thank you.
Extremely well written, a moving and emotional story.
Making love with your eyes is a concept I thought I understood. Having it conveyed through Amelia's eyes brings it to a much higher level of feeling. A truly visual touch.
After trolling through so much drivel on this site I am so glad I found this exceptional story.
This is magnificent! A tale of physical frailties trumped by human strength, love and understanding. Wonderfully rich writing enhances the brilliance of the characters and the warmth of the basic plot. It speaks to the reader in a way few others have. Each part climbs one notch above the last. It's no wonder it has received such high praise and stands at the top of the list in outstanding ratings. Congratulations to the author on an artfully designed tale.
I thought this was an excellent and enjoyable story but for one thing that bugged me: you shifted tense frequently, from past to present, then back to past, then back to present, etc. It's a fairly common problem, but I was surprised to see it in an otherwise well-written story. I recommend trying to avoid that in the next story.
What an incredibly moving, bright, wonderful piece of erotic art! I am not going to go into detail, unlike the wonderful author, but I absolutely loved this piece. Such a stunning view of lovemaking! Thank you, thank you! Please keep writing!!
English
well done not only have you caught the true essence of a wheel chair bound woman
beautifully written a pleasure to read keep on trucking tenbears43; blue you now have a new fan!
I'm the PWD
I'm fairly certain I'm the PWD you mentioned in your prologue . This story is beautiful, thoughtful, erotic, romantic, non pitying, positive, sexy and empowering. I have a lump in my throat. This story is a gift. Thank you.
Beautiful
Daring
A brave and exploratory piece. You come very close to hagiography, but veer away at the right spots. Intriguing, riveting, highly sensual. Well done.
A different and very inspired piece!
Didn't warm my heart
It might be that this is too sensitive for me to have a good perspective - pretty much a life-time wheeler myself - but I saw his attitude toward her as condescending and pitying. He seemed focused on her fragile, broken body (I think those were the words used) rather on the woman. It just didn't work for me. Sorry.
excellent!
I was moved and warmed. Empathetic kink with spirit. Good!
The two drawings mentioned in this story are now posted in my Illustrations section
- Rope and Veil
- The Pink Scarf
Stunning
I love your writing it’s like a dream; languid and vivid in equal measure, slow considered, poetic. And I like the way you develop your characters. And the mystery and the way your writing is so in the moment (at least in this story) and the way you don’t lay it all on the table straight away.
Although I’m not a wheelchair user it seems your account of being one and becoming emotionally entangled with one is very perceptive, some of your insights really made me think. A Beautiful story, looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.
Naoko' s review
Please go to Naoko Smith's blog to read her wonderful review of this story and two others with a similar theme:
http://feministerotica.blogspot.co.uk/2015/1 0/using-wheelchair.html
I have nominated you for Sexiest Female Character in a Story and Most original Sex Scene for the Literotica Awards. I hope you win both categories
Beautiful and Heartfelt
The beauty of your story is not mere glamour; it lies in the vividness of the characters and the bravery and sensitivity that they bring to each other. Thank you for opening my eyes...
Gorgeous
I am a wheelchair user. You have a great sense of what it means. She is beautifully seen, strong and vulnerable. I have never thought to include my disability in my writing, but you inspire to. I will write and post. Thank you.
Terrifically original. Unexpected. Well-written and skillfully handled.
I was having a bad night on the site. It can frustrate me at times. It can be ugly and petty and small.
Thank you for reminding me that it can be so much more. You made my night, and a new fan.
Outstanding
Extremely well written, a moving and emotional story.
Making love with your eyes is a concept I thought I understood. Having it conveyed through Amelia's eyes brings it to a much higher level of feeling. A truly visual touch.
After trolling through so much drivel on this site I am so glad I found this exceptional story.
WOW
What a great and fantastic story. Thank you.
Rope and Veil (a three part MUST READ series)
This is magnificent! A tale of physical frailties trumped by human strength, love and understanding. Wonderfully rich writing enhances the brilliance of the characters and the warmth of the basic plot. It speaks to the reader in a way few others have. Each part climbs one notch above the last. It's no wonder it has received such high praise and stands at the top of the list in outstanding ratings. Congratulations to the author on an artfully designed tale.
I thought this was an excellent and enjoyable story but for one thing that bugged me: you shifted tense frequently, from past to present, then back to past, then back to present, etc. It's a fairly common problem, but I was surprised to see it in an otherwise well-written story. I recommend trying to avoid that in the next story.
What an incredibly moving, bright, wonderful piece of erotic art! I am not going to go into detail, unlike the wonderful author, but I absolutely loved this piece. Such a stunning view of lovemaking! Thank you, thank you! Please keep writing!!
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