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It's not getting less confusing
Poor Hayley is still going in circles, or maybe spirals. Look forward to the next chapters. Now we have a fourth male and a female. Your voice is definitely to be preferred. I'm very happy to find that Mark is less than perfect.
RE: It's not getting less confusing
Alas, Hayley's going to stay confused and mixed up for a little while longer ..... just submitted Part 4, which should add some additional complications to the mix .....
Also, Part 3 is more a "filler" that segues into Part 4, which in turn leads us into Part 5 and some hot stuff. So enjoy, but Part 3 isn't as hot as Part 1 and 2 or Parts 4 and 5.
...........Chloe
Hayley got to me in Chapter 1
And I've been hooked ever since. I love how she thinks, I love how she loves the pleasure she receives. I've got this picture of her in my mind: beautiful, sexy, cute, adorable Asian girl. I want to taste her! Good job, Chloe.
RE: Hayley got to me in Chapter 1
Re that picture of her in your mind: beautiful, sexy, cute, adorable Asian girl - if you look me up on Pinterest (ChloeTzang), and look for my "Snow on Taipei" Board (it's the last Board on my collection), there's a few photos there of how I see Chloe myself (I like visual reminders, it helps me think thru the story as I work on it.....)
And thx for the kind words :) ...... Chloe
So good!
I really like this story. It definitely gets the right emotions across and your vocabulary is terrific(Astringent! How many times has that been used in a Lit story?)
Anyways. Don't want to gush. It's just really good.
Re: So Good!
Hey, thx :)
And just advance notice. I'm going back and doing a complete rewrite on Part 1 - as Literotica also notified me that it plagiarised a bit to much from "Miaw" - so am in the midst of a serious reworking which I think will improve the whole story rather more and which will also be rather more "me".
Ciao.........Chloe
Hayley has my interest!
Following her adventures is a nice relief from a busy day. I must admit, every Asian I see who fits that description is giving me
dirty thoughts. It was nice Hayley and Claire's friendship is continuing to grow.
hai hao
OK Chloe, I'm reading these in sequence and installments 4 and 5 will be next. Looking forward to them. Hayley surprises me sometimes, but this is fiction, so Hayley can be any way you want her to be!
Are we going to hear more of Claire?
I guess it was inevitable that Hayley joined up withe Claire and both exchanged stories although not all. Have you removed your Pinterest now? as I went to look at your "Snow on Taipei" Board to see how you saw Hayley (although you put Chloe in your comment below) I'm guessing these tales aren't just your imagination. :)
Are we going to hear more of Claire?
Alas, Pinterest removed my Pinterest account for me. Too many politically incorrect Pins at a guess. Must have offended some poor little twinkie. Ohhh the micro-aggression! The pain! Never mind, going to recreate my boards this weekend but I think I'll split them into two accounts - one for my stories and the other for my "political" pins (coz that one will get deleted again for sure).
Re Claire - not really, she was a bit player in the story to start with, there's really nothing I had in mind for her in Hayley going forward.
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