by eidetic
Thank you for this -- it was outstandingly good; five stars good, and as a first submission (at least under this pseudonym) of an incredibly high standard!
A system of automated, cross-firing MG's ,
covering across an in-depth,
variety of proximity fused APM's.
Backed up by a double row of high fences
topped with electrified razorwire
and patrolling in between the fences,
roving packs of poorly-fed, junkyard dogs
All that make for good neighbors,
the very best kind
and personal tranquility.
Ooommm...
Sounds like what is needed are "writers' blockers", couple of fullbacks to run interference.
"And I would detect these changes in behavior how?"
Ha, ha, very good.
I have no idea how to respond to this. It's well written and all but what the fuck is going on in this story. Like why have none of the writers been arrested for trespassing or something. There are so many questions.