Scarves

Great story - Great descriptions!

Nicely done! Very erotic and imaginative! Hope to read more!

Beautifully written seduction!

You nailed it. The pace, the suspense, the seduction. You didn't drag it out too much, or rush things along. The characters were all fully fleshed out and interesting. You sucked me right in. Bravo!

Excellent story

Thank you for sharing this story. It was wonderful. The build up and story was wonderful and the writing was spot on.

The best!

Great build-up and momentum. Wonderful girl-girl sex.

Sweet

Scarves are so handy. Well told.

And, by the way...

...I forgot to mention that it's so refreshing to read a story that doesn't involve an 11-inch cock. Thanks for that, too.

Less, but 'nuf, said. Thumbs up.

That was hot, 5 stars hot

Where is it?

I'll get to the "where" question shortly. But first, I have to agree it was a 5-star effort. Very hot! Now to the "Where is it" question. If this had been a guy sharing his woman with another guy, the comments would have been dominated by the Moralizing Majority decrying it an another disgusting cuckold story! But apparently the sharing of a lover is only bad if a guy shares a woman with another guy! All you in the Moralizing Majority are a bunch of hypocrites!

Liar

One writer and two editors but still full of errors.

"And therein lied the point of Megan and Bridget's friendship" is probably the most illiterate but there are others.

Such a tease

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I just loved the images, pace and tease. More, more....

Thank you

The positive feedback has been tremendous. This is my first crack at erotica, so I wasn't sure how it would turn out. The great comments and numerous favorites have really been satisfying and are pushing me to start my next story. Thank you all!

As for any mistakes or awkward wording, please blame me and not the editors. They did a hell of a job. Any author, amateur or professional, would be lucky to have such eagle eyes looking over their work.

1st effort?! Bravo!

I'm hoping he joins them in the shower and they get refreshed enough for another round.
Please😜

Folks who bitch

Don't realize how hard it is to write an error-free story. See the story and the delicious interaction here and forget that the wrong word was used now and then! Great story!

Fabulously done!

Excellent first attempt. Those editing errors, you'll get better at that with practice. But you can't teach crafting a story this hot :)

Fun story!

Very sexy fantasy, great descriptions and fast paced action.