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The Revelation

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by Anonymous

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by legerdemer06/08/15

An erotic prelude

... that brings me to the edge of what's about to happen next. Ah, to be the woman about whom this was written... I'm almost jealous of her....

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by AlwaysHungry06/09/15

selbstverständlich

If only you knew her, you would understand.

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by Anonymous06/11/15

flattery

...will get you everywhere....oh, to be that woman of whom you honor this way!

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