All Comments on 'Bad Walls Make for Good Neighbours'

These were some solid characters. Enjoyed reading your work. Welcome to the party and continue to write for us when ever you like.

write more! and maybe have the seductrice do both wife and husband...

First story? Great job! I'd like to see a sequel as well, with the mother-in-law.

A great story that was an exciting read!

Very good start.

well it was good while it lasted lolz. ill miss the cougar stories.

Love the bossy, domineering woman using her own sexuality to control him... maybe she can turn the wife into a little pet too...

Hope to hear what happens with the MIL!!

Really liked the story I hope there is more stories to come. Your story was up there with the masters of this genre Thetalkman and Seducedhylas. Kudos to you and I hope there is more real soon. Put me in the camp for the MIL sequel.

This has got to be one of the best stories that I have read here and I have been around since the beginning. This captured my ultimate fantasies to a "T". I too wish that it would have been a bit longer or hope for a sequel. I loved it when Roxanne had Derek service her on the porch and sent him home covered in her cum. I would love to read more of how he was blackmailed and manipulated into situations that are close calls to being caught.

Please continue to write for us. It is much appreciated.

Rare for me to read 5 page stories but wow, talk about a page turner you can't put down!! I can't wait for more of your stories.

Totally horny story, please do continue. Can hardly wait for the next one.

I knew without a doubt that i would be reading the next story...Hurry and make the rest...lol

Please don't disappear. Make many more like this!

I loved this Story, was well written with a great Story line!!

Can you please make a second chapter about the pushy mother-in-law

I rarely find stories this precisely up my alley, and well written too.

The only thing that grated a bit was the exposition you had Roxanne do, especially where she's giving a blowjob. Showing would be better than telling in my opinion, even if it is a character doing the telling. In fact, I'd have to read it again (with more, um, attention), and I expect that much of the exposition is superfluous in that what she does conveys a lot of the same information.

But mostly what I would like is to read more like this story.

Damn.

This was a great story. Not a great first story, just a great story period. I'll look forward to reading any other stories you care to share with us. Thanks!

Loved both your stories so far keep up the good work.

After the whole setup with the thin walls, I was hoping that Lacie would somehow end up unknowingly listening as Roxanne fucked her husband.

You throw in references to the present, but as I am reading, I get the hint of dialouge banter of 1940's 50's era movies. The flow and texture are similar. Splendid piece of writing. 5 STARS

great story loved the idea. Please write a sequel which involves first the mother and then both mother and wife.

Any chance of a sequel with the MIL?

A really sick story. No apologies...Writer..Readers...go fuck yourselves.

Superbly crafted piece of erotica here. Loved the domination from the hot cougar. Very engaging story line, along with some awesome descriptions that painted some amazing pictures. Muscular ass and thighs, pretty painted toes and those meaty cunt lips all make for a mouthwatering combination. Defo a 5 star story

Well written and erotic.

You should to a sequel.

A sequel with the MIL would be great

After all this Years I still love it. Shame that the sequel never happend.

Maybe I'm weird, but by far the hottest part of this was her dry humping him as they danced. I do wish there was more of that, with her using her butt the same way. 5/5 anyway