All Comments on 'All the Power in the World...? Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Really good

Loved it. Could be a little longer.

ARavenInTheNightARavenInTheNightalmost 9 years agoAuthor

I didn't realize how the site would format the story so it ended up being short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No do not have him be with more women. It's not fair to Mellissa.

Especially with more endowed girls. Unless you put her with other males. More endowed than him.

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