This was really well done except for a few things. Throughout the beginning you said that our main character was shy, but it seemed to be that he was really quite confident. He was the initiator in all of it. A lot of stories on this site make the shy boy turn dirty super quickly, and, to be honest, it is a bit of a turnoff. Liked the rest. Didn't notice many typos (and I normally do) and I cannot wait for the next installment.
It's been a few months since this story was published. Haven't seen part two yet. Hope you get around to writing it. Want to see where this goes, like in his ass. :--)
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Really good except...
This was really well done except for a few things. Throughout the beginning you said that our main character was shy, but it seemed to be that he was really quite confident. He was the initiator in all of it. A lot of stories on this site make the shy boy turn dirty super quickly, and, to be honest, it is a bit of a turnoff. Liked the rest. Didn't notice many typos (and I normally do) and I cannot wait for the next installment.
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Wish you lived next door.
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Seducing Carter again?
It's been a few months since this story was published. Haven't seen part two yet. Hope you get around to writing it. Want to see where this goes, like in his ass. :--)
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