All Comments on 'Wishing for Redemption Ch. 01'

Waiting.....!

Has potential but it could use some help from an editor. I'll be looking for more though.

You're off to a good start with these stories. You should consider using a second editor to catch any mistakes though. I am really looking forward to reading more about John and Hope, and the adventures they may have.

Thanks for sharing.

Love this it has Great potential Keep it up.

5 stars

I like the story, look forward to more. But, I agree some basic proofing would be nice, start in the second line. Nothing major but I rend to be picky.

I came in interested, but you are reusing waaay too much from other Genie stories on Literotica. A little bit of originality would have gone a long way!

I understand that some readers dislike some of my material and that's perfectly fine. Nobody can please everybody however, not everyone who reads my work has read similar stories and, as an author, I have to keep that in mind and give at least a little background into this kind of genie at least. Thank you all for the praise and criticisms. All are appreciated.

the first chapter was a lot like other genie stories. The second chapter was better, it explained about John. I hope you keep up the story line in the next chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.