Sex on a Stick

Interesting !

Very intrigue on this story already! Please continue !

oh very nice!

Please write some more. I enjoy your writing style and I've marked you as a favourite author.

Wow

Amazing story! I hope to see more of your work in the future!

Oh my.

That was brilliant. You went exactly where my dark twisted little fantasies go....and I loved every word of it. Thank you very much.

Greedy as ever....more, please?

Awesome

More please!

More please

Oh God, I need more!

yes yes

Please write more!!!!!

omg

This made my panties SOAKED! Wow... I want to experience THIS...

OK...

...so we know she's "his," but why? How did it happen? Explain with details and a history. How does the book relate?

This is primal, so it will appeal to a lot by itself, but this is too rushed. Add more detail to what his and her body experienced when they came.

More details at the end.

this was amazing and so hot!!! The way he described it and the way she was spread out and could t do anything was amazing! But I really want to know how he finished deep inside or what he continued to do and the aftermath. If it's a bit more longer with what happens then this will be a perfect short story!

Please, I need more.
You really have a gift you know.

Soooo amazing omggg

Please write some more chapters to the story it's so hot and amazing and interesting omg

great but need more

We need more details. Why is she with him? What does she look like? How big is his cock?

So good

I love literotica that speaks not just to one specific situation but also speaks to a larger universal animal lust that lays dormant in all people. Very well done.