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intoxicating
this is one of those wonderful stories that you find yourself speed reading to see how it ends. I had to read it twice to make sure i didn't miss a single word. You draw the reader in and don't let go until the last minute. Well written.
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Nice story, I like how she chooses her victum so selectivly.
mmmm tasty!!
Great story...I love a strong bitch! ;)
Strong prose for a strong character
Great use of diction and word choice to create a building sense of tension! It was a riotous good time, seeing such a primal nightmare manifest in such a contemporary, non-cliche`d setting. So much of this story positively rippled with energy, and I'm definitely saving a copy to show friends that creativity is not dead--UNDEAD!--on the internet.
Short and Sweet
This is a wonderful new look at Vampires. It reminds me of La Blue girl the sex craft Hentia. Thanks for the thrill!
Amazing Story
Written in a way that is far from normal and nothing like I would have expected. The style suits the story and I couldn't stop. Amazing read. Very, very well done for producing such a good work.
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