I like your concept of 'The Lady' and 'The Slut'. Although this maybe exaggerated somewhat for the purpose of the story - I I suspect there are many who being pulled in opposite directions by counter forces.
All the main characters have been well crafted to come across as multi-dimensional and the reader is left caring about what happens to them and what happens to the various threads of the story.
I appreciate this can't go on forever but please keep going a bit longer.
I am writing this after reading Chapter 18. I skipped ahead because I wanted to comment where you might see and know how much I admire this series. I am glad to see that after a couple of years you are still inspired to keep telling Gwen's story.
The progression of Gwen's awakening is masterfully described. I like how Tim is along for the ride, not pushing Gwen, but loving her advances. I am hoping that he will become a bit more masterful and force Gwen into something very risque. I will find out.
I love the long form stories, especially in the hands of a Wordsmith, as life itself is more of a novel, not a short story. (Tho a quickie is always appreciated.)
I am only reading a couple of chapters a day, enjoying. I hope that Gwen's story continues.
"You have so much to catching up to do. This is going to be fun."
BusyBadger, I think that you have finally hit upon the theme for this series.
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Anonymous07/03/15
Loving this story.
I found this story series a couple of weeks back, and have read through the entire thing in the intervening time.
It is, in a word, a masterpiece.
I was disappointed when I got to the end of this chapter, and realized you hadn't written any more, yet. (I realize it's free, and you owe me nothing, but I'm so glad to see that your most recent entry is less than a month back, so I assume another chapter is coming soon, if you're following your previous trend of a story every month-ish.)
So many Literotica stories are superficial stroke stories (not that that's always a bad thing), and even the ones that go further than "They fucked and he covered her with cum," can sometimes be so ridiculously unbelievable, but this....this is different.
The feelings that Gwen has as she's pulled in both directions by the Lady and the Slut, the internal debates, the reactions that the other characters have to her progression....all brilliant.
Please, please, please keep this going for a few more chapters. It's the best thing I've read on Literotica in years.
having read the entire series as a novel in a couple of sessions, I was quite intrigued that you get away with quite repetitious scenarios at quite a slow pace. Really it should come across as boring, but there is something about the style that keeps one reading. That is quite a skill, congratulations. Thankyou for a good read.
English
I HAVE BEEN ENJOYING EVERY CHAPTER
Thanks for sharing your characters and their lives. It has been an excellent diversion from the mundane world beyond my front door.
Another great chater
Always enjoy the chapters, this is one of my favorite stories, and is always well written. Looking forward to the next adventure.
Take care.
Thak you
Still on a roll there, thanks for keeping this chronicle going, I'm still really enjoying it.
The only bad thing about this story it the wait for the next chapter. Great work.
Very good
Of course I wish it kept going
Excellent as usual
Brilliant Story
I like your concept of 'The Lady' and 'The Slut'. Although this maybe exaggerated somewhat for the purpose of the story - I I suspect there are many who being pulled in opposite directions by counter forces.
All the main characters have been well crafted to come across as multi-dimensional and the reader is left caring about what happens to them and what happens to the various threads of the story.
I appreciate this can't go on forever but please keep going a bit longer.
Can't wait for the next episode.
Love it
I love this whole Part 2 story as much as the first one. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us.
Kudos
BusyBadger,
I am writing this after reading Chapter 18. I skipped ahead because I wanted to comment where you might see and know how much I admire this series. I am glad to see that after a couple of years you are still inspired to keep telling Gwen's story.
The progression of Gwen's awakening is masterfully described. I like how Tim is along for the ride, not pushing Gwen, but loving her advances. I am hoping that he will become a bit more masterful and force Gwen into something very risque. I will find out.
I love the long form stories, especially in the hands of a Wordsmith, as life itself is more of a novel, not a short story. (Tho a quickie is always appreciated.)
I am only reading a couple of chapters a day, enjoying. I hope that Gwen's story continues.
Thanks,
Rick
"You have so much to catching up to do. This is going to be fun."
BusyBadger, I think that you have finally hit upon the theme for this series.
Loving this story.
I found this story series a couple of weeks back, and have read through the entire thing in the intervening time.
It is, in a word, a masterpiece.
I was disappointed when I got to the end of this chapter, and realized you hadn't written any more, yet. (I realize it's free, and you owe me nothing, but I'm so glad to see that your most recent entry is less than a month back, so I assume another chapter is coming soon, if you're following your previous trend of a story every month-ish.)
So many Literotica stories are superficial stroke stories (not that that's always a bad thing), and even the ones that go further than "They fucked and he covered her with cum," can sometimes be so ridiculously unbelievable, but this....this is different.
The feelings that Gwen has as she's pulled in both directions by the Lady and the Slut, the internal debates, the reactions that the other characters have to her progression....all brilliant.
Please, please, please keep this going for a few more chapters. It's the best thing I've read on Literotica in years.
really good writing
having read the entire series as a novel in a couple of sessions, I was quite intrigued that you get away with quite repetitious scenarios at quite a slow pace. Really it should come across as boring, but there is something about the style that keeps one reading. That is quite a skill, congratulations. Thankyou for a good read.
A great story
Damn! I have caught up to you. I shall keep checking anxiously for new chapters.
You know how to keep us in suspense. How long must I wait for the next chapter?
Can't wait
Awesome story! Please keep going. Read the whole thing. Very well done.
Unbelievably good.
Loving the totally believable way the story grows gently. Glad Andrew looks set to be a 'bit part player' and not a 'main character.
*****
Five stars
This story is Pablum!!
What can you say about pablum!
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