P40 Bedouin Dreams

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. Easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing another great story.

Very Impressive Writing!

MST, you continue to amaze me with the quality of your stories. Your characters are personable and believable. I did not notice any anachronisms or errors of fact. Which is flabbergasting in a historical fiction these days.

If this is the result of stepping outside of your comfort zone...

...you should do it more often. Very well done, a wonderful read.

Wonderful story

I'm a sucker for anything WWII related that involves planes. Your usual good writing and storytelling. Thanks.

Well done indeed!

An excellent piece of work indeed.
Good character development considering it's a short story, and intriguing "what if's".

More please!

A sweet desert tale

At the beginning, it seemed as if you were inspired by Antoine de Saint Exupery's last desert flight, and was ready for something with a tinge of The Little Prince. It turned into a story much more like Paul Bowles' Sheltering Sky. Of course, in the end it's all your own. Nicely done, conveying the resignation to fate and nature in the beginning, the resignation to being the outsider, the last ditch but successful effort to protect beauty and humanity, and the pilot's displacement amidst the Bedouins.

I am honored beyond words. What an unexpected and wonderful gift, and more touching because of it. Thank you, my friend.

So beautiful

A very sweet and astounding story. Thanks

Just to say thank you for this lovely story

Thank you.
D.S.

I've !!!

I've now read this story 5 or 6 times and it still makes me want to be him !!!***


***I give it 5 stars and a 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!

Mmm...

The story is excellent, and I echo everyone else's praise.

Except one thing: Cardiff. In *England*.

I'm an Englishman myself, so I accept it as an honest mistake. But a Welshman, now; a Welshman would be seriously offended by someone suggesting that Cardiff is in the Godforsaken, enemy land of England. The 'Diff is very definitely in Wales!