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Wow
That was an excellent read.
Gosh Golly, Gee Whillikers!
MST< I am out of words for to praise your creation.
very good!
Love the insight!
Leonji
I liked the idea but...
I have to say the typos and the grammar robbed it of the fifth star. Still very good though.
Intriguing, thoughtful, and well written
I have read many stories that I enjoyed, but usually soon forget them. This is one of the rare stories that is not only enjoyable while reading, but also lingers, in a pleasant, nostalgic way. MSTarot, you have defined Lucifer as a complete, complex, living, breathing, world-weary,real individual. The Devil is supposed to be all evil, but your vision has some good in him as well. And I loved the addition of Maat to the story. I believe Lucifer is wrong, though - the sheer number of Muslims, Christians, and Jews that believe in God and angels is overwhelming. If God, Lucifer, and angels are to "fade away", as did the Greek and Roman deities, I don't see that happening for at least another 10,000 years. That being said, science is continuing to push forward, in a continual, rewarding progression. Bravo, a standing ovation from me!
Atheism 101
Impressive, perhaps, for sophomores.
The stories swimming in your head
Wow. The technowizard is the next big thing. I like that idea. Excellent story, my friend. Exactly what I hoped would happen with the radio challenge.
Thank you.
No Name?
Perhaps she should have introduced herself as the new devil, would her name have been Siri or Cortana?
Give Tx Tall Tales a nudge for us.
We eagerly await new stories from him (and you).
Excellent
I can hear echoes of Mick Jagger as he plays the opening of the Stones signature song in this story.
Please allow me to introduce myself
I'm a man of wealth and taste
I've been around for a long, long year
Stole many a man's soul to waste
Lucifer's musing on his past and what possible future is in store for him and the Heavenly Host is a good touch. And the introduction of the innocent yet knowing goddess born of technology is genius.
Lastly, Siri is not Her but, Cortana is. So, this new goddess of technology must be Cortana.
Overall a good story, I hope there's more to come.
Technology itself is neither good nor evil ...
... so she's neither benevolent goddess nor devil.
And her name isn't Cortana or Siri. It's Patientlee! (It's my birthday story. I claim naming rights!! ;-)
Jesus Christ!!!
What an amazing imagination, to come up with that. Terrific.
Hot Diggidy Damn
That sir was an inspired and awe inspiring tale, one of your finest works in my rather humble opinion. Your portrayal of Lucifer was great, not as one sided as we usually get. I am eagerly looking forward to your next effort.
Best regards,
It is so well written
At times during this story it felt like I was there. Best 2 page story I have read on this site by miles.
great luck, great song, great story
There are many worse possible songs that could have come on which you could have then been stuck writing a story about.
You did this one justice.
Wow!
Guess what this reader will be thinking of next time he hears that song.
5 Stars, one of the best.
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