All Comments on 'Carrie'

I would had the brother, make his sister quit her job.

Loved it.

it was all good

loving story between a brother and a sister, but I can see how most brothers would have said quit the job.

i would have made her quit the job and had her move in with me.

Started off a little rough, but it started to have an excellent flow after just a few paragraphs ...

Excellent story! Keep up the good work!

Superb.I would'nt make her quit her job at all.It's more fun when your paying for it.

mmmmm that was hot, I wold love to have my sister sucking my cock through a gloryhole

WHAT A BULLSHIT ENDING!! IT NEVER OCCURED TO THIS GUY TO FIND OUT ...WHY .. HIS "LITTLE SISTER" WAS SUCKIN STRANGE DICK ??? AND DID SHE DO IT FOR THE REST OF HER LIFE ??? SHEESH ~

That was lovely. Not entirely what I would class as erotica, from a female perspective anyway. The romantic side of the story was great, you definitely have a way with words. Despite what others have said, I thought that the ending was perfect, a relationship between John and Carrie wouldn't have been right.

fucking rubbish

The story started off with so much potential, but the ending completely ruined it. You said the guy had a fascination with her then after he got what he wanted he was content with stopping the relationship.

Waste of a story.

for a sister that turns to sexual fantasy and eventually to reality is beautiful! I have had the same only with two nieces! Enjoyed the story very much, thank you!

I wish I had a big brother like that. But I don't have any brother.

all the boys and man came here know that ur sister is a cum slut

Hot story! Needs a follow up.