All Comments on 'Ritual Deflowing on Halloween'

I know this may seem odd that a christan woman would ever read this kind of story but I am an open kind of peroson. Although I would have liked a bit more story (I like steven King)such as why the ritual this is the perfect story to read to your lover, husban, or partner to get you in the mood. Please keep up the writting.

it should be a bit more lengthy to be satisfying sexually!

Kudos 2 the X-tian woman who first posted 4 this tale. More Chrstians should allow themselves 2 B open-

minded like yourself! The ones I know are all extremely closed minded. If it shows an alternative 2 their rigid Dogma - it is the work of the Devil! LOL

This has only been increased by our Governments' War on the Muslim World too!

OMG, give it a rest already.

NE way, this story gave me an erection, but little more.

What the hell was that about? The story itself was creepy as hell yet the ending was normal. What pagans say, " now go home and fuck like..."? I'm sorry, this was kinda terrible.

just wow.

Nothing but shit

Please thoroughly edit your work! The first problem is in the title! "Deflowing?" Do you mean deflowering? Come on you guys.