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Susan this is a great story. I love how descriptive you are with the sex between couples without dragging it out. Your understanding of human behavior is right on the money and I love it. When George thanked Darryl that was a classic moment and you just knew someone was going to be openly grateful. Can't wait for the next installment. And I vote, I gave you 5 stars on the first installment and this one and added you to my favorite author list. Be well.
In the Newhart Show, it was the other way around ....
Larry is the one that had 2 brothers named Darryl.
Strange way to end it
Well, SJP you did a pretty good job of building the tense scene even though I'm not sure the women would have jumped right in to the sex the way you wrote it. But it's your story.
What I found totally lacking was how suddenly years have passed yet the bad guys show up once again to surprise the now happily fucking couples again. Really?? To me it would have made more sense to have the story continue with Darryl forcing the couples to switch once more so that every one of them had fucked and sucked both of the men or women who were not their spouses. Maybe force them into group 69, both as couples and as one daisy chain. Then it could get really nasty with Darryl finding out who packed some lube and have them all get it on with some anal fucking. Then while that is going on Darryl, Larry and Larry leave with all their valuables and the nice truck. The horny sextet just keeps on fucking until all are too tired to move, or their balls give out!
Once again, its your story and I gave you a 5***** due to the sexual tension buildup.
Thanks for the read,
dezurtdawg
please
chapter 3
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