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Nice try
better luck next time; Ohh dont give up your day job yet.
How can
anyone think so little of themselves to write something like this? You need help!
1*
Another baboon..........
??
I didn't really get this story. If the woman was the narrators wife or long term girlfriend them it makes sense. He just went out on a date with a bitch. Zero titillation.
sorry who spends that kind of money on a date, most dates drop panties at about $100
if she ran off with another guy why give her a ride home. I went out with one girl for a date and she spent her time talking to another guy, I simple walked off, then drove off. She was his problem then.
stupid is, well just stupid
Why in the hell did he feel the need to be courteous to her?
a. You fuck somebody else at a party
b. You have just said that we are not a couple
c. You are open for all the verbal attacks there are
c. You can find your own ride home
POSITIVE SIDE
Only a fool would continue seeing her
Now you know she will never ever be trustworthy
Now you know she will be a serial cheater
Now you can keep all of your stuff and not hire a divorce attorney
(money in the bank!)
If you want to keep fucking her fine, just remember she is only a warm hole
You're a perfect typical cuckold. You're unattractive, you find a top notch
you buy her love with your cash but you're an inferior schmuck so she fucks better men and you allow it and get off from it. Tell Noelle you will marry her and give her a life of luxury and you will allow her to fuck other guys and will suck their dicks, get them hard and put them in her. If she gets tired, her studs can also butt-fuck you! But listen, its better for you to just call Aaron and he can face- and butt-fuck you! If you give him the money you spend on the girl, he will be very motivated. Then you do not need to waste money on the girl. Also, you get your cum fresh from Aaron instead of her pussy. Weak, inadequate, inferior guys must put on lipstick, mini skirt and thong stockings and high heels and service superior Men. Don't be a cuck, just be undercover gay.
Another trash tale.
Written by a trash author.
No wife in this story of a cuck in training
No romance, nothing exotic in the coupling, no one was forced, i guess there is no category for this "tale". Probably should have been assigned to the trash hub on your computer.
Don't like the woman but really don't like the protagonist. Later that night he probably went down to the Leather Lad Club for an evening of self flagellation and cum sucking.
Your story had no beginning, no real conflict, and it went nowhere. Please don't post any more of this. Think of the children.
What a humiliating story
I be embrassed to put this crap out there. No stars . She used this asshole pretty well. And he took her shit without a comment. He should have left her a the party. Also no one can consume that much acholol.
written
by another person who hates themselves and now everyone but the sickos hate him to.
# 1
Fem gay shit
Would Anybody?
Nobody but nobody would stay at the party, and then hand them their drinks after their tryst unless she was his wife or long time live-in girlfriend and they were in a dom-sub relationship. Stories have to have at least some believability.
Not a LW story....
Not a LW story....She was just an acquainted...But at least he can say that all that money was well spent, because it prevent him from having a whore for a girlfriend...Now she can go and fuck Aaron all she can and he will be the one to support her...1*
loser
Anybody who has to spend hundreds of dollars to try and fuck a girl is a pathetic wimp.
johan, find some other website to put your garbage on.
You are as sick as that idiot that spent all his money. Wimps, all of you.
annony calls us wimps but that may be true or not
But there's no doubt about one thing dear annony. YOU"RE THE BIGGST ASSHOLE ON HERE Gave it a 5
Good start
I hope he gets over his shock and kicks arse.
Pass It Up
Time to move on big guy, you spent way to much on this slut. She doesn't care about you and it shows in spades. Payback would definitely be coming for Aaron when he least expected it. Noele is just another good looking bitch that treats people like shit.
Pass it up man dump the bitch as fast as you can. If she contacts you ignore her to the max that will really bother her with her being so use to having so much attention. Aaron did you a favor but I'd still fuck him up, take your time do it right.
Shit - haven't these cuckold assholes ever heard of the other sites where those demented asshole like this shit?
Author - do an overdose and die!
Amazing. So fucking hot.
I wish I was him (not Aaron).
I'd have pissed in that fucker's drink!
Nice writing. That asshole would have learned a few things that night from me. #1 you take that bitch, you keep that bitch and make sure she gets home because "we" are done! #2 you are now a target for getting fucked with, your drinks get fucked with every chance I can find your ass and laxative is my favorite extra ingredient. #3 Youtube will be having your fun stuff posted on there real damn soon, anything & everything to humiliate your stupid ass will be posted. Assholes like good ol' Aaron need to be taken to task in a very big way and all of his "friends" will need to see it!
I missed the loving wife!
Oh wait! There was NO wife! Please post this garbage correctly.
I liked it..
Hey man, ignore all these negative assholes. I liked the story. Continue with more in the series.
what was the point of this awful turd of a story?
i guess the author wanted to prove to all of us that he the AUTHOR is a sexual zero and a turd. Truly revolting
why can we not give a zero score?
this is not even worth a 1 , or is the writer aiming for a pathetic score for the pathetic lead character being pathetic and not being able to score no matter how many dollars he spent chasing someone who wasn't interested - that's not cuckolding at all as there is no link between the guy and noelle except the money he spent !
On Target
Great job. Hairy VAG was comparatively speechless. 5*, my man.
Self-hate and a yearning for humiliation is an abnormal mental condition.
You might want to consider treatment, even if you enjoy this fetish now. In the long run it usually results in clinical depression and self-loathing, which can induce feelings of paranoia and suicide. I hope you get the help you need.
Oh my God!
Harry's right! This really sucked.
Asshole! Toss the drinks on them, scream that she's a fucking tease.....
.....and a cheap whore and get out of there. Never, and I mean never acknowledge her existence again.
Move on, and don't be such a fucking pussy.
BTW, author..... WTF is this doing in LW?
There are several categories more suited to this mess than LW.
And if you're going to continue to write drivel of this ilk, just quit now.
Otherwise, I'd suggest you read up on some of the wider, more interesting and involved scenarios and pursue one of them...hell, any one of them would be better than this, "Oh, I'm so inadequate!" bullshit. Hey, try a BTB story out...see if you got what it takes to write a man standing up for himself.
The chippy used him, led him on, then treated him like her ugly cousin while on a date! Dude, just walk away. Now.
Lol
Get your ass fucked faggot
WACC
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Similar Experience
As a small guy with cuckold desires, I enjoyed the first chapter. When I was single, a popular guy asked me to come along with him and a girl he had met. When we got to her place, he walked her in and I stayed in the car forever. She wasn't my girl, but the wait was excruciating! Thanks for writing, Jimmy
yep johan26 all women are just dogs in heat...
never had a sex life have you johan26? It certainly shows.
As it should be.
Betas like us might make nice relationship material, but its only right and proper that after we take a woman out that she has the option of being with an Alpha male instead. Thats just natural.
whore
If I arrived and found my date fucking someone else I'd just pour the drinks over them walked out left the whore to it and headed home..
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