Taken at a Party Pt. 02

10" cock vs author's 5" cock

says it all

so this is proof

when you say a story is worse story possible, the writer proves you wrong and makes an even worse one. (this story causes electrons to cry)

Last Commenter Had it Right

I did.not think it was possible to write a worse stor y than the first chapter.I was.wrong. This is really bad.Non plausible non erotic cliche cuckold drivel.Congrats One of the most ridiculous chapters ever.Done .No point in reading anything this author posts

cock size

You guys don't get it, it is about pleasure, finger,oral, penetrating, most woman, will tell you, they do not enjoy big ones...

.the focus of this tale...

causes me to sit back and wonder what the writer is trying to put forward... To get rooked into one party and his date hooks up with the host and then goes back with wife... Not in most males' life time... In my army years had a soldier that could land any woman... But he had absolutely no ability to hold his own with other males advancing on his dates... I have to wonder if the writer is HIM...

love this series!!

VERY easy to relate to. i feel exactly like the main character. so hot. i hope this continues

Puke!

Is this stupid fuck [author] related to bt2 & wantswhiteboys? It would appear that the single fucked up cell of putrid defective brain matter has divided and then this asshole shows up. Once again, author OD please.

MOVE AL0NG FOLKS

nothing to read here.

He deserved it all...why?

He deserved it all...why? I said in part 1 that it was money well spent to learn how his date was a whore...But he didn't learned nothing...he even gave his facebook to a guy he barely knew and had humiliated him...And not happy with it he even accept the invitation of a bull that was a lonely man, and that even with his big cock couldn't make any woman love him...When his "big gun" stop working he will comit suicide for being a lonely and sad man...This could be a story called: "Poor rich boy"!!! And agree with one of the comments: when we think a story couldn't get worst, we are always wrong...once bad, always worst from then on...1*

Hours each day between her legs?

Assuming they both work, factor in the commute, down time and important things like eating food, paying bills, sleep, you know, the usual shit, life throws at you. Explain how the fuck he can spend hours between her legs? Seriously? Hours? How about dehydration, or the fact that his tongue would be exhausted or her pussy getting sensitive and sore or just fucking bored from laying there for hours at a fucking time?

God damn I hate stories that ignore basic rules of physiology and pass it off as erotic.

What a joke! Very clever. Odd form of entertainment, but if that's what floats your boat . . .

You must have a lot of free time on your hands. Lost another burger flipping job?

berger flipping beats sucking cock for a living like you do dear annony!

Maybe you could become someone's slut and have your ass pumped

WRONG CATAGORY

This should be in fetish or non- concent/reluctance, or maybe erotic couple.

, How fucking stupid is this guy, I hope its fiction

1 star!

Cut your cock off and by yourself a dress you are a cunt!!!

Beyond Stupid

We really need a "stupid" category and the ability to vote stories into it. 1*

Please stop.

PLEASE.

I can't understand how anyone gives this more than a 1.

It's the same stupid story as the last one. First it was his girlfriend, now it's his wife. I suppose the next one will be his daughter. This author either writes these stories as fantasies or because he's trying to piss off as many readers as possible. Either way he's mentally deficient and needs help.

-5

There needs to be a separate Cuck (ie.. terminally stupid) category so this stupid shit stays out of LW.

Keep at it!!!!

This was amazing. I STILL wish I was the husband.

Like one commenter said, I THINK the next one will be his daughter...and I am so goddamn hard thinking about it.

I wish I was the boyfriend from the first story because this wouldn't have ever done this again because I would've smashed the first bottle I could grab over his head. I'm no tough guy but that is abuse and the girl or wife deserves to be left wherever they were no second chances

Best he go off and drown himself in a 2" puddle of water......

......he's a moron, doomed to be a sucker and doomed to be a victim forever.
1* for writing crap like this and thinking anyone with any self respect would like it.

O Brother

The title should be Given at a Party. He didn't take shit she gave it to him. Time for him to dump the bitch. A baseball bat against the guy head wouldn't be bad either.

WACC

Boring. If you're going to this shit at least try for some originality.

Brilliant

Loving it. One of the best.

Incredible

Incredibly erotic for us little guys with cuckold desires.

I think you suck

I am giving you a one simply since you have the ability to form sentence. You have to be one of these freaks to write about them. I rest my case feak

As it should be.

So far, so good. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I love it when the Alpha male takes what he wants.

Great... and I appreciate your devotion.

5 stars .....

Cuckold

Why the hell did he go to Aaron's party he should have avoided it like the plague and taken advice on how to sort his premature ejaculation out for the sake of his wife.