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leads to a mental health facility or to hospice with AIDS
1* why be married to someone elses fuck toy?
why is this story continuing?
>90% negative, nay flaming, comments and yet it continues?
In my book the writer has now opened the door for personal attacks of her/his character and mental status. The complete lack of writing quality is already established.
What a Joke
It must be difficult writing this while living in moms basement. One of.the worst I've read here.Keep.going you obviously get off on self flagellation.Last comment
Why not put this is Fetish where it belongs.Humiliation is just nothe erotic.But you know that don't you moron
Why did she marry him?
She clearly doesn't like him. Hell, he's not even in the friend zone.
so hot!
a new chapter every day! this is so hot!! thank you!! maybe he can suck his wife's toes as aaron fucks her better than he ever could.
Sick Fucks
psychopath |ˈsīkəˌpaTH|
noun
a person suffering from chronic mental disorder with abnormal or violent social behavior.
• informal an unstable and aggressive person: schoolyard psychopaths will gather around a fight to encourage the combatants.
Not talking about the author necessarily but those like kidg1000 in crave more and more humiliation. Please get some help or get back on your meds.
This is NOT erotica this is pathology. Nothing wrong with erotica, even cheating wives stories but this is vile.
NO, I didn't read a word but I did read KidG's comment and hope that he or she will get some help or at least get taken out of circulation. Probably be good for the "author" (and I use the term loosely) as well.
Gay shit
# 1
Leads to a divorce
Where else could it go? She demeans, degrades and humiliates him. She obviously doesn't love or respect him. Why would he stay with the bitch? Stupid story, worse ending.
This is ridiculous
Where is it going to lead? I just can't get past how someone could be humiliated like this and tolerate it whether in real life or a story. A stable person with at least some self-respect and a modicum of respect for their family is going to take this!
Time to kick that bitch to the curb and for him to seek some therapy and get one with life. Everyone deserves common courtesy and civility!
Chagrined
NO
JUST STOP
Agreed with Foolscap
Quote: "This is NOT erotica this is pathology. Nothing wrong with erotica, even cheating wives stories but this is vile."
I couldn't agree more. If someone finds this shit erotic they really need to get a self esteem checkup!
Stop, stop now!
you are seriously fucked up to even think up this shit.
This should go in gay or something besides here, hope you are not allowed around children.
WTF? This idiot is still writing this crap.
I guess it must be his autobiography and his wifey wants to make sure he keeps putting the bullshit out there. If that's the case he needs to dump the bitch, grab his balls out of that jar before he kicks her ass out of their home and mans up!
Please do not continue with this shit!
This story is sad, but...
This story was and still is sad, but sadder is to keep writing it...1*
Dude [aka fucked up demented want-to-be author] - get a clue, nobody wants to read this shit except those putrid a-holes that slime around calling themselves bonnietaylor2 & swingingjoe [trannyfags].
Crawl back under the sewer pipe from which you escaped from.
dont listen
dont listen to these assholes who are pissed off that this is their life. and you actually had the balls to write about it. I cant wait for part 4.
payback
would have walked up to the bed and punched as hard as could in his balls then dragged him out of bed and kicked the last single fuck out of his nut sack then stood on and popped them and told her she was just a cunt and she could have him and walked out and left the simpering pair of arseholes together
she is being a bitch
even if she wanted to also enjoy his cock, she should be respectful of you... she isn't, she is just saying "Fuck You" if you don't like it.. all her way with no respect at all
Good one
I wasn't expecting him to get to watch her making out. Lucky him. I wish I was him...
Sick
Yep, if I said it once, I have said it a million times. You must be sick to read something you do not like. Simply go read a different genre and post your hatred elsewhere. I personally can relate to much of this, but remain a cuckold wannabe...although I'm not sure. The entire story has me very excited. Thank you. Jimmy
Overkill
Humiliation of husband looks fake. They must have planned it but there are no clues. So Wife going out of her way to humiliare her hubby looks fake.
More nonsense
and for that *
Cuckokd
You don't pick your women very well do youl, get your premature ejaculation sorted and the they'll most likely not go for sex elsewhere. Or you'll be a frustrated cuck the rest of your life
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