Taken at a Party Pt. 04

shit after a night of heavy drinking and lots of bad mexican
it keeps coming out, it stinks so bad it hurts your eyes, you ass stings and you cn't flush it away fast enough

Didn't read it...just rated...

Didn't read it...just rated it!!! This was dead and smelling since part 1...1*

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utter shit

love it!

four days in a row of this awesome series! thank you, i am loving it!! the cuckold humiliation is really hot. i like how he is submissive to his wife and bull. he should be worshiping wifes feet too :)

the door

Hit the door and don't turn back

You must get off writing this shit

See a psychiatrist. You need help!

Ha

This has to be satire. It's too stupid to be taken seriously.

Haven't read this part yet

Is this the part where the narrator kills himself? If so, Let me know and I will gladly read it.

Stupidity runs amok.

Can this guy even stand up without his spine? All he has to do is say NO". Tell them to get their own coffee, pack up his stuff and leave. This was just ridiculous. Even for fiction this was bad.

Quit reading after she said she wanted a divorce.

She did say that right because who wants to be married to someone they don't even like? She's in love with Aaron, that's fine and she absolutely detests her soon to be ex husband so it's obvious she's getting a divorce.



Wait, you mean she's NOT getting a divorce? I'm confused, why would she remain with a man she hates? It's not money because a divorce would get her alimony and probably the house. It can't be love because any person who treats another human being like that has to loathe them. It's not sex since she is dating a man she loves. So why is she not filing for a divorce?

Wow

No respect for Hubby. Can't believe he is going to sign over the bank accounts to his wife. She will dictate if he can buy a coffee. What a loser. Can't believe that he cannot stand up for himself. At least walk away and see how long Aaron hangs around his slut wife.

Like Krisie said....

I want to read the part where the narrator offs himself becasue he is obviously and clearly too stupid to live. This should be followed quickly by Aaron and Marta.

The jellyfish should bubble on out to the parking lot and sit in the sun.....

.....just long enough to dry into a snot stain.
Or, go into the kitchen, grab the meat cleaver and have Aaron and Marta for dinner.
Then go next door to Suzi's, as soon as she answers the door, push in, tie her bent over a chair and fuck her until you can't get it up any more....for several days. Durning rest periods, chop her pets into small chunks and put them down the garbage disposal. Then stick a baseball bat into her pussy and walk out.
Getting your crap together at home, load up and head for the coast. Find a 14 year old runaway girl and shack up with her. She'll appreciate the smaller gear......
Stupid? senseless? Cruel? Yup, just like your story.

This is dumb every man would of attacked him if not both of them . As a man they would of had to kill me before I allowed anyone to humiliate me like that. It should of never got that far , divorce would of been immediately after her acting that way

Funny

it was a bit much even for a guy with cuckold desires; however, it is even funnier to see the same negative comments. What part of fiction don't guys understand. I especially loved the outing of the cuckold at the first party. Believe it or not, we came home and my wife was sopping wet. Did she do him at the party? I don't know and she won't talk about it.

just no respect

He has no respect for himself and neither do they.. divorce her and find some who respects and loves you

Phew

Finished. Well done. But why did you stop? The plot still has great legs...