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The Ancient Eternal

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by Anonymous01/20/04

A critic cannot court

As the voice of angels surrounds this spire
I stare into that sea which defends you from my gaze
in truth I am but one of a litany of suitors
all embraced just once, then sent to oblivion
For in your eyes I see the bonds that tie you to your king


GCM

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by RobbyR101/27/04

Very Well Done!

Well thought out and Very well written. Excelent use of the vernacular. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous04/18/09

Superb! I loved this story!

Morgana you have a great talent for writing! Very sensual story and beautiful story!

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