All Comments on 'A Warm Body'

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luxey313luxey313about 19 years ago
Stone Fucking Fox

I dig it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
oh nice

I loved it..comes from the hole in you heart. A deep place.

Adakgirl

McKennaMcKennaover 17 years ago
Good Stuff

I enjoyed the word play between "hole" and "whole." This speaks volumes about how the narrator views this certain relationship, as does certain phrases like "acid love." I'm left feeling confused --but perhaps this is your intent, to confuse the reader as much as the narrator is confused.

"Ne'er my wife

And yet she swoons

For what I refuse to deliver."

She swoons over ...nothing? This is the type of confusion I'm talking about.

"And nothing corrupts

The spoiled whole"

If it's already spoiled, what could corrupt it, goodness? Wholesomeness?

Interesting read, I'm left feeling as unsettled as the narrator seems to be. Any time a poem creates an emotional respose like that, I think it's good stuff. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I thought

I thought it was great :) Well done!

-1hotfuck

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Here we go again with that other woman...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Holding.

Will it hold ~ the whole truth ~ about the hole. Word play very witty.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AN UNLOVING UNION

what bonds them together, TK U MLJ LV NV

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